oh love

oh love

A Poem by Daniel Atkinson

breathe the dawn
oh love.
catch my breath in your hands
i sigh,
oh love.

dew in your hair
the sun, your eyes
the world is
there.

© 2013 Daniel Atkinson


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Oh, I really like this. So simple, so pure. You brought up a lot of feeling in just a few short words. Very nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A most subtle and perfect piece, well done, good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 21, 2013
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Tags: love, romance, dawn, dew, sun, hair, breath

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Daniel Atkinson
Daniel Atkinson

DULUTH, GA



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