Just One Moment

1/1/10 W.S. Day Lodge

For just one moment

Get inside my head

See through my eyes

Use my lens as your looking glass

See your beauty

Your perfection

See it through my minds eye

For just one moment

See your imperfections disappear

See the flawless angel I see

For just one moment

See through my love

Erase all doubt for eternity

For just one moment

Feel the beat of my heart

Grow in my soul

For just one moment

Feel you take my breath away

Feel all worry melt away like spring frost

Taste this moment

Take a breath as it starts to fade

Now look in my eyes

Do you feel what I feel?

Reviews

[Kristina Moulaison]

This is very beautiful son. Love the- my lens as yuor looking glass and melt like spring frost, which is superficial and transitory. You should say grow instead of growing- it would suggest a double meaning, that you want her to grow into your soul and that your heart is expanding to recieve her. Lucky girl! I think she might see. I would push return a couple more times, but that's just me. Very well done.

[Amber]

I think this is my favorite, so far, out of all the poems you've written... ;) You are so talented Colby