Aisle 11

Aisle 11

A Poem by Vertigo Cat1111

I’ve been buying iT witH my own monEy
I wantEd that shirt but Need to know responsibility

I went Down aisle 11
I guess my newest sign from heaven

Maybe another or some other day

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I can tell the end is coming
There’s something about the way it hasn’t been sunny
We’ll be under the skyscrapers
We won’t see the aftermath till later
I’m ready for the end again

© 2022 Vertigo Cat1111


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This is crazy mysterious to me in the best way possible and I keep coming back to the title. Was there a message in that aisle? A warning or is just over? I like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I’m glad I was able to deliver with the mystery… much appreciated.
I like the idea about your use of the end coming...and how it hasn't been sunny...
I hope we can come out from under those skyscrapers for one last look.
Maybe I will be under our apartment in the Bronx...
endings, endings...and more endings.
Beginnings must be down Aisle 13.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review. I always appreciate the heart you put into your words. Much apprec.. read more

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Added on August 14, 2022
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