Bookspine

You make me feel a little more alive
Now you’re a new protagonist in my life
The moon’s a little more whole
And there’s an extra instrument in every song
You’re the spine in my book
I had a bridge, a beginning and an ending
These pages of you are my hook

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

You have set to pen of page, here, a fine piece of Poetry that speaks to my heart and mind of that fulfillment of having found that special one in your life that does give life purpose and meaning, and makes life worth all the price of living in every breath's moment until that very day we die ... Very enjoyable read ...

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! Your review is so appreciated and I’m so glad you enjoyed. (:

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham]

Enjoyed, that I did, and you do write well ...

[Earthrise]

I love this whole thing, but the thought of an extra instrument in every song especially sticks out to me. That person really adds extra life to every moment, don't they? Sometimes you don't even realize it, but the extra music is there.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you, I loved your review, it was really spot on. Thank you for reading and reviewing you’re very appreciated!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love this metaphor and how you carried it through from beginning to end and made it work so well.
j.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much, I’m so happy you enjoyed it. It’s much appreciated (:

[Betty Hermelee]

You must have a middle a spine, and therein stands the perfect man....he is now the protagonist... beautiful metaphors... love it!
Best, B

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much- I appreciate your kind words and review endlessly! (:

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Cat!
Best, B