Breach

Breach

A Poem by Vertigo Cat1111

Walk with me
Talk with me
Are you hungry, honey?
Let’s get you something to eat
Hit the city, dine, stay up all night in our hotel room and never sleep

Press against me
And don’t forget me

And when the storms breach my heart
It was the atoms of a smile
We were bound together from the start
Maybe a castle
Maybe a house
Maybe a farm
All built from stone
Maybe an apartment
Probably a home

© 2022 Vertigo Cat1111


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Although it was a rough start, this love can grow over time and it's always heartening to look to the future...and it seems not to matter where or how, as long as you are together. there is a strong need to bond... and stay together forever.
Nice write!
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. It’s so appreciated. (:



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Although it was a rough start, this love can grow over time and it's always heartening to look to the future...and it seems not to matter where or how, as long as you are together. there is a strong need to bond... and stay together forever.
Nice write!
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. It’s so appreciated. (:
Oh those passionate beginnings! So full of hope and future. Nicely done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so, so much! I appreciate it endlessly! (:
Simple. Honest. Sincere. A concise, clean recording of emotion and thought. A beautiful poem.

Rick

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

This review is so kind and amazing. I really do appreciate it, thank you.
home is definitely where the heart is...but pressed against a lover...that is home no matter where it is.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it endlessly. (:
A relationship that was meant to be, will create a bond so powerful that eventually you'll find comfort in the heart of your partner. Together, the two of you will build the stones of a place you call home, where you feel most protected and love. Thank you for sharing Vertigo Cat, I enjoyed reading!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for leaving such a great review! You’re so appreciated 😊
Aura

2 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
If the homes are built from stone and their foundations are solid, just maybe the relationship will endure. If the storms are anticipated.maybe they can pass by. Thank you Cat, your lines allowed me some freedom to wander.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the stunning review. It’s so appreciated (:

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Added on July 26, 2022
Last Updated on July 26, 2022
Tags: Walk. Talk. Love. Night. Adventu

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Vertigo Cat1111
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