Cut It Out

My memories feel so empty
Since I cut you out
Walking down LA night roads
Lost
But I had you around
And if I had one more night with you
I’d tell you how much better I am without you

They always seem to underestimate
Change circumstance
Never circumspect, point and cry
At everything I hold inside me
There must be something going on
For you to think I’m so wrong
Cause now I know where I belong
Somewhere over multicolor fields
A fiddle playing a song

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like the below lines my dear friend.
"For you to think I’m so wrong
Cause now I know where I belong
Somewhere over multicolor fields
A fiddle playing a song"
The lines above. Colorful and honest. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much. I loved your review more than I can say. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[Betty Hermelee]

If I had one more night with you, I would have laid out my heart to you....I am so much better without you...I know where I belong... and it's not with you, but in a safe place, perhaps a filed of lowers where gentle songbirds are singing to me....even though you may think I'm wrong..... This is telling him the truth about your feelings...sometimes so difficult to do....
Best, B

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I loved your words. Thank you so, so much for the kind review. Appreciated endlessly.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very Welcome!!!
Best, B

[Neville]

seriously enjoyed and what a smashing introduction to your ink my fine literary friend ............ Neville

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much, I appreciate your review more than I can say. (:

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and that song would say, thank you for leaving me, I am stronger now and I am content to wait
for someone who might appreciate me.
I like this.
j.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much for the review- I appreciate it so, so much.