Galactic Phone Line

‘She's hell in a basket, just making a racket, I love every second, it's f*****g fantastic‘ -Halsey

I let the desert take my soul for you
Now it’s lost in some UFO but you’re safe through and through
The later into the night the more I remember the old days
The fridge, the sun, trailblazing haze
Grabbing Pepsi’s on the highest roof
Sometimes your curtains feels like California curtains
I promise we’ll get to our hotel
How do you make memories into music?
Cause I think can do it
I know I can do it

Your voice sounds like the one that wakes me up in the middle of the night
Extra terrestrial sight

You traced the outline of me
But don’t go please
Little red riding hood stuck in this trap
It sucked but that was that

Electrocute my weather vane
The mall will split in the storm and it’ll never be the same

You know my phone line
What do you do in your own time?

You have my address
So get dressed
You got the magic
So don’t hold it back
Or it’ll get tragic

It wasn’t my choice
You just click and you just stick
To my team
It was all just a dream
Extra terrestrial, chlorine sunscreen

You abducted me
(I let you)
I won’t run if you set me free
You’re otherworldly
But you could still tell me you’re falling for me

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Extra terrestrial dream of want, need and memories and hope. Trying to be free, trying to be abducted; I see a great need here for love and comfort; someone is stuck in a rut.. and wants to be free, maybe up there somewhere; in the cosmos with A galactic phone line for whispers of love.
Well written and in St. Elsewhere…which I love.
Best
B.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Your comment was even more poetic than the poem! Haha, thank you so much for the kind review, it’s always appreciated . (:

[Betty Hermelee]

I'm flattered, but no! Thanks so much for your incredible reviews!
Best. B

[M. J. Smith]

A certain mystery, passion, but something.. something dark and possessive, too.
An intriguing write.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much. I appreciate the review endlessly (:

[M. J. Smith]

You are most welcome, Ma'am.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

makes us feel alien when the one we love and would do anything for just won't
admit that he or she loves us.
it hurts like hell.
and makes us want to drift to another planet.
j.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much for the kind review, it’s always appreciated.