End Of The World

We'll all get to see the world end in our own way once in our life.

Everyone said they'd be okay if the world ended

They have already achieved everything

I lied and said I would be fine if the world fell apart, too

Honestly?

I wouldn't, really

'Cause I wouldn't have you as the ground cracked

And as the zombies attacked

Roof caving in because those billionares thought it'd be smart to steal those cursed artifacts

'Cause I wouldn't have you as the meteors rained and flew

But, hey the world already fell apart

That winter morning I lost you 

Author's Note

A short one, but I actually rather like it a lot. Thank you so much if you read and reviewed! Best of wishes, and stay safe!

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes our whole world falls apart when we lose someone we love whether it be a romantic love or a dear friend or family. We can grief the loss for a lifetime even if the person is still alive. Great work and imagery in this short but emotional poem

[Ghost/Gray]

I thought I´d might check out some of your writings, since you´ve left some kind reviews on some of my writings. And wow, this poem really didn´t dissapoint! The sad realization that you wouldn´t care anymore, because the person you loved so much wasn´t there anyways. Beautifully written!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! I appreciate such a kind review! I hope you have a great day are staying safe!

[NicMac]

I'm not much of a poetry buff, but I really like this one. It has a lot of emotion for so little words. Short and bittersweet, very nice.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind review

[duff]

The end of the world. A spectrum of feelings unguided without knowing what the future looks like. Nice job. I like the possibility and reach of it.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! This is one of my favorites I've written so I'm happy you enjoyed it.

[Just Kim]

I like this, kinda sad, but well written

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much for the review!

[Seriana]

I rather like it, too. What weight we place on a person, then once lost, our world is forever gone. Death by death is understandable. But death by leaving? Ugh, the pain. I feel you.
Short pieces are great, too. :)

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much! I appreciate the kind words, it's so uplifting.