Sunflower

Sunflower

A Poem by Vertigo Cat1111
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For anyone who's ever lost someone, in any way.

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Why don't you talk to me again?
Tell me everything will be alright
I don't want to live anymore with patient grace
I'm begging for dawn's new sign
I can't sleep anymore
But when I drift I hear your fading words
Telling me what will one day be mine
It's been over a year, since I've been searching for the daylight I don't think I'll ever find.

© 2020 Vertigo Cat1111


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Vertigo Cat1111
I appreciate it endlessly if you read, and please tell me if you enjoyed it, and I hope you're doing well. (:

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This is so true to so many...keep searching and searching and never find. But, one day, the darkness and pain will lift and daylight will endure. I just wrote something about lingering in an abyss, darkness, emptiness...and when the daylight came I was able
to leave this blackness!!! Coincidental! Great poem!
Best, Betty

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

That's a very great coincidence, haha! Thank you so much for reading and leaving another very kind r.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

You’re very welcome... I will put up my piece in a few days( will be out of town)
Best, Bet.. read more
Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

I'm very excited to read it! (:



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This poem brings to mind the spirit of the book/movie: "He's just not that into you." This narrator seems to be waiting around without much encouragement coming. Lots of people do this (so you describe reality vividly), but I would advise that a year is enuf time to invest in a bad investment (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for the review! I really appreciate it.
I do understand the poem my friend. To lose contact with good friend. Leave a empty place. Hello my friend and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you understood and enjoyed it.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I did my friend and you are welcome.
To lose a love, rips our peaceful places.
Our sweet joys, ooze out, washing away our sensibilities.
We are abandoned, without hope, to suffer alone.
Have we enough thread, to weave a new heart?
Are we certain we want one?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review! I agree with what you're saying, it's very true.
VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Thank you for posting this heartfelt poem. I enjoyed it very much. In fact, my response became a poe.. read more
This is a wonderful piece and a joy to read! Waiting on a sign feels like a never ending up hill battle. So well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

Thank you so so much, I appreciate the review endlessly!
A year is a long time to wait for a sign. It would create weariness. I feel that in your lines. You want some sunlight, some warmth. Sunflowers always make me feel better. Nice little write Colacat.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review and your kind words as always
What an example of synchronicity: you speak of a year since something has been lost, and I have been going through the same experience. Thus, I can very much relate to this poem. The feelings are described quite accurately.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Yes, we’re all hoping 2021 may be better!

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