This is so true to so many...keep searching and searching and never find. But, one day, the darkness and pain will lift and daylight will endure. I just wrote something about lingering in an abyss, darkness, emptiness...and when the daylight came I was able
to leave this blackness!!! Coincidental! Great poem!
Best, Betty
That's a very great coincidence, haha! Thank you so much for reading and leaving another very kind r.. read moreThat's a very great coincidence, haha! Thank you so much for reading and leaving another very kind review!
3 Years Ago
You’re very welcome... I will put up my piece in a few days( will be out of town)
Best, Bet.. read moreYou’re very welcome... I will put up my piece in a few days( will be out of town)
Best, Betty
This is so true to so many...keep searching and searching and never find. But, one day, the darkness and pain will lift and daylight will endure. I just wrote something about lingering in an abyss, darkness, emptiness...and when the daylight came I was able
to leave this blackness!!! Coincidental! Great poem!
Best, Betty
That's a very great coincidence, haha! Thank you so much for reading and leaving another very kind r.. read moreThat's a very great coincidence, haha! Thank you so much for reading and leaving another very kind review!
3 Years Ago
You’re very welcome... I will put up my piece in a few days( will be out of town)
Best, Bet.. read moreYou’re very welcome... I will put up my piece in a few days( will be out of town)
Best, Betty
"It's been over a year, since I've been searching for the daylight I don't think I'll ever find."
I can totally relate to this line. You think it´s gotta get better soon...time has passed...and it is still the same pain as in the beginning. I like to share Silmaras view that time heals all wounds but sometimes I wonder if this is always true. Some losses are quite harder to accept than others. I guess not looking back is the best cure but easier said than done... Really enjoyed reading your poem!
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3 Years Ago
Thank you so, so much! That's actually my favorite line in this one, I think, so I'm so happy you en.. read moreThank you so, so much! That's actually my favorite line in this one, I think, so I'm so happy you enjoyed it too.
Most of us at some point in our lives have lost someone, and with that said I have truly learned that time, time is the best medicine in God´s pharmacy. Wonderful the honesty of your words in this poem, full of feelings and the sadness for the silent treatment, but believe, eventually we do find the daylight and all the light that we set our hearts to find!!!
Stay happy!
Sil
:-)
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3 Years Ago
Thank you so much, and the positivity is so, so welcome. You seem to have an uplifting light and you.. read moreThank you so much, and the positivity is so, so welcome. You seem to have an uplifting light and you wanna keep all others around you happy. Thank you again! And I agree, time is the best medicine.
Enjoyed reading your emotive and expressive work. I hope all worked out in the love life area and you are now happily engaged with another person who cares. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara
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3 Years Ago
Thank you so much! And it was my pleasure to read. I appreciate the kind words very much.
Hi Colacat, I hope you are well. I absolutely loved this poem, you have such a talent for being able to express such deep emotions in few words. As someone who has lost people, this really spoke to me. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work!
Olivia
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3 Years Ago
Thank you so very much, and I hope your doing well yourself! I'm sorry I'm so late to this, I haven'.. read moreThank you so very much, and I hope your doing well yourself! I'm sorry I'm so late to this, I haven't been on in a while. But the comment about talent with few words means so, so much to me and I deeply appreciate it.
The title of this magnificently written poem is golden-crown poetry, meaning your title crowns the body of your poem and rules over the meaning. I like the strong feeling of longing in this write. tyfs
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3 Years Ago
This means so, so much to me. The feeling of longing I tried to bring into it so it means a lot to m.. read moreThis means so, so much to me. The feeling of longing I tried to bring into it so it means a lot to me that you felt it in there.
This appealing soulful poem seems to be about a lovers silent treatment, very common and you express it swell. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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3 Years Ago
Thank you very much for the review! I'll happily check out your poetry (:
🐱💙My biggest writing inspirations are Lorde, Gabbie Hanna, and Phoebe Bridgers. If you like any of them feel free to talk to me about it! Never be afraid to go on tangents to talk abou.. more..