Sunflower

For anyone who's ever lost someone, in any way.

Why don't you talk to me again?

Tell me everything will be alright

I don't want to live anymore with patient grace

I'm begging for dawn's new sign

I can't sleep anymore

But when I drift I hear your fading words

Telling me what will one day be mine

It's been over a year, since I've been searching for the daylight I don't think I'll ever find.

Author's Note

I appreciate it endlessly if you read, and please tell me if you enjoyed it, and I hope you're doing well. (:

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

This is so true to so many...keep searching and searching and never find. But, one day, the darkness and pain will lift and daylight will endure. I just wrote something about lingering in an abyss, darkness, emptiness...and when the daylight came I was able
to leave this blackness!!! Coincidental! Great poem!
Best, Betty

[Vertigo Cat1111]

That's a very great coincidence, haha! Thank you so much for reading and leaving another very kind review!

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome... I will put up my piece in a few days( will be out of town)
Best, Betty

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I'm very excited to read it! (:

[Poetic Beauty]

Waiting and being patient in many aspects of life aren’t my strong suit and this poem has a bit of longing and sorrow mixed in.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much for the kind review! I absolutely despise being patient too, it's the worst!

[sedulous_mind]

Wonderful words again!

"It's been over a year, since I've been searching for the daylight I don't think I'll ever find."

I can totally relate to this line. You think it´s gotta get better soon...time has passed...and it is still the same pain as in the beginning. I like to share Silmaras view that time heals all wounds but sometimes I wonder if this is always true. Some losses are quite harder to accept than others. I guess not looking back is the best cure but easier said than done... Really enjoyed reading your poem!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much! That's actually my favorite line in this one, I think, so I'm so happy you enjoyed it too.

[Silmara McGarry]

Most of us at some point in our lives have lost someone, and with that said I have truly learned that time, time is the best medicine in God´s pharmacy. Wonderful the honesty of your words in this poem, full of feelings and the sadness for the silent treatment, but believe, eventually we do find the daylight and all the light that we set our hearts to find!!!
Stay happy!
Sil
:-)

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much, and the positivity is so, so welcome. You seem to have an uplifting light and you wanna keep all others around you happy. Thank you again! And I agree, time is the best medicine.

[Silmara McGarry]

:-) You are welcome and Thank you!!!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your emotive and expressive work. I hope all worked out in the love life area and you are now happily engaged with another person who cares. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! And it was my pleasure to read. I appreciate the kind words very much.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Okay..Sara/Sunflower

[Olivia Danielle]

Hi Colacat, I hope you are well. I absolutely loved this poem, you have such a talent for being able to express such deep emotions in few words. As someone who has lost people, this really spoke to me. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work!
Olivia

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so very much, and I hope your doing well yourself! I'm sorry I'm so late to this, I haven't been on in a while. But the comment about talent with few words means so, so much to me and I deeply appreciate it.

[Arundass TP]

Enjoyed well . Beautifully written poem

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The title of this magnificently written poem is golden-crown poetry, meaning your title crowns the body of your poem and rules over the meaning. I like the strong feeling of longing in this write. tyfs

[Vertigo Cat1111]

This means so, so much to me. The feeling of longing I tried to bring into it so it means a lot to me that you felt it in there.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

This appealing soulful poem seems to be about a lovers silent treatment, very common and you express it swell. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you very much for the review! I'll happily check out your poetry (:

[Davidgeo]

Look inside. Fug the world.