Sun, Moon and You

There is only one of the people you love in the world. Remind them of that when you can. Because there's only one sun, one moon, just like that person

There's only one Grand Canyon

There's only one of my companion

There's only one California

Just like your aura

There's only one Pluto

Just like this duo

There's only one Disney

And you're the only one who can make me this dizzy

There's only one heart that I can take ahold of

And that's yours, my love

There's only one Nara Dreamland

Just like I'm you're biggest fan

And so, darling, it's true.

There's only one sun

There's only one moon

And there's only one you.

Author's Note

This is one of my favorite poems next to Nemesis that I've written because... I don't know, I just like it. (: Thank you if you review! Also... if you don't know what Nara Dreamland is, search it up if you like abandoned places... it's literally heaven there, IMO, but it got demolished. ): I just think abandoned places are gorgeous, rather than scary.

Reviews

[Marina]

A poem of lovely sentiments, Colacat. Sweet words of truth to your beloved, worn completely on your sleeve. You leave the reader in no doubt about how special this person is to you. One to cherish, just as this poem is. I checked out Nara Dreamland and it looked a fun filled place. So sad to see it has closed. Hopefully they can build something just as wonderful in its place. A beautiful poem.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I'm so happy you checked it out! Thank you so much for such an extremely kind review, as always. These words mean so much to me because you put so much thought into them. (:

[Vari]

Interesting and engaging, I got myself thinking how I would praise someone's admiration and the answer is your poem. Praises of someone like this feels to be so lovable. I can't stop myself thinking about someone I know. Glad to read this Colacat. Have a wonderful day ahead :)

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much! That means a lot to me and I’m glad I could remind you of someone you think of so dearly. (:

[Storm]

This is a beautiful devotion to a loved one. I love the comparisons of only one. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes to you.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate this and best wishes to you back. ☺

[Olivia Danielle]

This poem was absolutely beautiful, I just loved the way it flows! I can see that this person is clearly very special to you. This is the first poem I've read of yours and I'm sure to read more, I really loved this!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! That really means so much to me! 💕

[Rose]

This is just... absolutely beautiful❤️ Sometimes poetry can steal hearts, and it has for sure stolen mine. I think it carried it off to Nara Dreamland! But I absolutely love abandoned and old places! They have so many stories and a hidden beauty to them! Much love to you and have an amazing day!❤️

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! I absolutely adore this comment you always find a way to put your lovable way of writing into stuff. And I just love abandoned places so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a wonderful poem.
"There's only one sun
There's only one moon
And there's only one you."
I loved the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Vertigo Cat1111]

And thank you for reading it! I really appreciate it

[Coyote Poetry]

There is few true loves in a lifetime. You are welcome.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I love this sweet poem on love. The Grand Canyon is vast and so is your heart. I'll be sure to look up the Nara Dreamland as you suggested. Hello Colacat! I am Dhara Ditzy_Kat! Nice to meet you and read your lovely poetry!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

It’s very nice to meet you as well, and I’m so happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking the time to read (:

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You are welcome Colacat. Meow.

[light and ashes]

Beautiful................

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much!!

[light and ashes]

You're welcome!

[Dave Brown]

very nicely done
this is what my wife keeps repeating to me
have you two been collaborating

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Haha, no! But that might actually be a rather good idea...

[Chris Shaw]

A delightful love poem. You leave no doubt in the reader's mind Colacat, that you have found a very special love indeed. Your descriptive write tells me so.

Chris

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed this one 💕

[Chris Shaw]

I did. Thank you :)

[AJNJ]

A beautifully composed professing of love. All those great places as unique as the love you write about. There is an earnestness in this poem that the reader catches on to immediately and which stays with the reader as a sweet aftertaste. And thats what made this poem special for me!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much! The way you wrote this review is so kind and inspired and just means so much to me.

[AJNJ]

My reviews are just based on the depth of the writer's words which in this poem are very touching and inspiring in themselves. Please keep writing and posting here. This website needs poets such as you. All the very best from me.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

And the best from me, also. I can't explain how much reviews like yours mean to me, but I can always give back with reviewing your art at least. (:

[AJNJ]

It will be a pleasure to read more of your great poetry and its wonderful to meet you :)

[Vertigo Cat1111]

It's so wonderful to meet you also!! (:

[AJNJ]

:)))))))) Cheers!