Ending

When things end, feelings don't. In fact, they seem to grow stronger, sometimes.

I didn't think I was gonna miss you.

Surprise, I do.

Do you know what happened to me after you were all gone?

You never cared

It was just a con

I was so in love with you this time last week

I still recognize your footsteps creaks

And I think I always will

I just keep telling myself it'll be over soon.

And maybe the butterflies weren't about you.

But we had so many plans 

Now it's all coming to an end

Sadly smitten with everything to lose

But maybe I can say goodbye and thank you

If I still love you, then what am I going to do?

I could have tried ignoring you, but 

This love jumped out like a candle in the black

You were part of the problem

Now your out of the picture

When you sold your soul

And manipulated with your hands

Don't you understand?

You took the money

And you ran

Chasing something I shouldn't

Something that's not real

And destroying everything that is.

Author's Note

Anotheeeer poeeeeeem. Please tell me if you enjoyed it!

Reviews

[Seriana]

You have a very matter-of-fact way of stating things. Simple and to the point. I feel like I have stepped into your world that is this book of your poems and each one evokes emotions begging to be ripped from the page, yet not knowing quite how to ask for help to be pulled out. Yes, that's exactly it! I like your writing. Nice pieces. I can respect the emotion on a personal level.
Again, wonderful!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you again! I really love the way you pictured it, it means so much. I actually forgot about this poem I wrote, and your review reminded me of it! Thank you again

[Chris Shaw]

You know what they say, absence makes the heart grow fonder. So even if you initiated the ending, it doesn't mean to say you are going to get off lightly. Ending a relationship is like living with an echo. It takes time for it to fade.

Chris

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Yes! That's a perfect way to put it, living with an echo. Thank you for reviewing again (:

[Laz K.]

Reading this was one of those moments when I went, "Thank God I'm not the only one feeling this way!"
You captured the feeling of a type of ending very well. Whoever has been there will nod, and say, "That is how it is!" and whoever hasn't been there can count themselves lucky.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! It makes me happy when people like my poems but I especially love when they relate to them! This made me smile and I’m glad I can make something people will relate to. That’s one of my main goals. (: thank you for reviewing

[Davidgeo]

You should probably smoke some grass.