The sins of the Parents

The sins of the Parents

A Poem by Gabriel
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Sometimes our parents teach us how to sin

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I am full of sin
It has rotted in my stomach since I was a boy

Listening to his mother scream in her native tongue
My father singing back with the voice of God

© 2022 Gabriel


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And now you win!
Despite how they plotted to destroy
the boy

hearing the discordant maternal note sung
paternal harmony found in a divine bod.

Billigami

Posted 2 Years Ago


Good morning Gabriel,
So sad to grow up in this type of environment. Hopefully, there were other parts of your parents that were positive and that you learned to overcome the negative (sins) of your parents.
Many of us have had a tough childhood but have learned from it to grow into positive and happy grown-ups.
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sadly not all parents set a good example to their children. In fact some of them can inflict permanent damage as a result of their poor behaviour. Hopefully the day will come when those children can take stock and think for themselves. They can learn from the mistakes of their nearest and dearest. An interesting read Gabriel.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow, no child should ever be affected by a parent's anger. But sadly, a lot of the world's fits of anger are deep-rooted in the souls of grown-ups, stuck in a child's mind. It's short and to the point. Great work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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