Opportunity Spelled Wrong

 

Ironic, surreal situation.

            I’m sitting here, slowly going jaded as usual.

            There’s a bunch of notecards and a pencil nearby

            As usual, I picked up the pencil and picked up the first notecard, to ramble.

            I flipped it around, and someone already wrote on it.

            “opurtunity”

           

            Given the context of the day, something seems shocking about the card.

            I think somebody up there is laughing at me.

Reviews

[Hedra Helix]

Owen for the love of God at least fix rambling, evertime I check back the tenses in this burn my eyeballs out. Then they have to regenerate, its just a huge process....

[Hedra Helix]

so....i attempted being subtle, alas it's not me.

EDited!

[Hedra Helix]

Im one of those who gets socks blown off by being proven wrong.

sockless oldschool edit:

Ironic, surreal situation. I'm sitting here, slowly going jaded, as usual. There's a bunch of notecards and a pencil nearby(.) As usual, I pick(ed/re) up the pencil and (picked up/re) the first notecard, to ramble(tense). I flip(ped/re) it around, and someone (has) already (wrote/re) (written) on it. "opurtunity" Given the context of the day, something seems shocking about (the card./re) (this?)
I think somebody up there is laughing at me.



Oooo im blatant, feel free to ignore me, whatevvvs;)

& possiobly. but laughing with, not at.
cos obviously.... you know how to spell correctly.
little tuneups, to remind that solidity is precious,
but the magic? it stays intact.
and youve got all the tools. I know you do.


mad respect and luv.

[lark]

verb tenses*

i like it. i have no idea of the context (i can guess, yeah), but it's cool.

*woohooblamstupiduselesscommentwawawaaa.s.s.sfksjkfs*