Naked Souls Love

Angel eyes, your loves up lifting

Your hearts weight; I am made to shift it

As your smile puts my spine in shivers

I am woven onto your spirit

Kissing it whispers to cool its worry

I love you, love you, love you true

Loves rebirth

Give you my offering 

Barefoot baby, Eden calling

Union changing, in different stages

Heart maturing, growing and aging

My infatuation never knows to tire

In your arms again; we will make this entire

Standing to find new insight

With desires to make you happy

Pretty honey, understand me

Planning forever bound to a soul so vast

Lets dance eternity, mapping in the stars

Tasting love beneath our blanket

Gorgeous woman, you more than make me

Ying to yang, and you have me happy

We can lay beneath the willow

Holding hands, you can have my pillow

Blow the webs and clear the mildew

Right now, heart wide open

Always and still,

this love keeps growing 

Author's Note

Colour green and can tab jewellery. Leo and an old soul lively

Reviews

[loowzerX]

I like this..elicits thought kind of.

[Erin]

By the way, I have to tell you IF you read my poem "Random Words Stolen from Writers Cafe" or whatever I called it, the first line of your poem is in it. I put it in Word when I tried to see what it would say about it. Just wanted to let you know so that you don't sue me or anything. I can remove it if you want me to. Just a thought.
PBP

[Erin]

"Angel eyes, your loves up lifting." Shouldn't it be, "Angel eyes, your love's uplifting"? Just a thought on grammar, other than that I didn't see anything else grammatically wrong with it.
I had to read this one out loud, it was so good. I had to pause my music and read this out loud not because I like the own sound of my voice but because this is one of those poems that need to be read out loud to get the true tone and meaning for it. It's really, really, really, really, really, really good. I'm definitely reading more from you. Good job.
PBP