Adrift

Kissing you in more than a dream
More than a thought may think or feelings may feel
Everything beneath the outside is freed
The surreal grounded in you and I, attached to the universe
Breathing fresh life and turning out verse
Birth of the new in unquestioned love reaching a surface

"Shhhhhh baby, be silent with me in this moment
Absorbed this whole purpose from its core calling
Drift with me in this river of reason"

No longer the seeking or wandering
Hearts refill in rebirth with vigor in new accord
Soaring in silence as love sighs
Holding one another and binding in this silver chord of light
Passions reason greeted by sunlight with a Siren

Questions simmer until we stand aside our reflection
Angel of blessing,
How do you amaze me so?
Who are you?
Where do you come from to stand now here beside me?
How did we get to become where time has found us?
Do you feel as I?
Fulfilled and fiery is this fountain of evermore, in this rare and morphing step
As two inside the love we feel blessed with the right to confess

emotion as fresh and pure as hand harvest organic fruit
This stretched hand to you always as brand new as a first breath
Love awaited, desired as the ages, every day remade fresh
Ascent in a separation we have ended
But above all baby, I am just so happy to be here

Reviews

[Erin]

Had to read it out loud again...I'm gonna have to listen to the sound of my own voice from now on when reading your poetry.
I didn't find anything grammatically wrong in this one, good job.
Your vocabulary is impeccable. It really is. I like that word....impeccable. You definitely have a thing for using words that add to the tone and overall...movement and shape of the poem. Good job, again.
PBP

[Marlena]

I thought this was beautiful. Certain words felt a little overused in parts, but it can be overlooked. Great work.