Child

Young child of hearts truth
What shall you inspire to
Idols frustrate
With lime lighters in dire straights

Young child if you fear nothing is true
Stay near and trust that I love you
Sending strength as your virtue
Dance in the art of words for growing hearts
Learned few, young one;
There are guardian angels to turn to

Young child sing a song in your heart
Hope is more than just holding on in the dark
When doubt is strong it is the love you can count on
Climb the mountain with in sound spirit
Know now it is your choice
If you choose, know now you have found home

Young child your smile is my drive to see better days
If you call I will be beside you and help you to find a better way
Let us see the wings with the tag Made in Heaven
You can be a woken angel barefoot in Eden
Distiller strength, spiritual we ever dream
Everything, anything just to have you with us

Young child don't let your heart close
Father knows your every ability to fulfill things the world has never seen
Mother knows you have her love and magic deep within your soul
Hold it with lock and key

When you are with these angels

Young child, rise and soar free

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

another beautiful writting you've done, i enjoyed reading it, very heart warming

[Erin]

I see no grammar mistakes....
In this one, I liked the style. The font was perfect for it. You're very good at doing that...style and font. You really think about how the physical attributes to your poem will help the metaphorical part.
Movement and flow is good. Great job.
PBP