Renewal

Renewal

A Poem by Boantlers






How is it your mind translates what it is that your eyes see


Conceptions compile thoughts which decipher the scripts sent from the senses


Refreshment is not adjustment, renewal is to wipe clean


He is as he is, thus she is as she is, yet as one, self peace is together; a being collective

© 2010 Boantlers


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Thank you for the kind reviews and the hints there Legion. I did some adjusting, I hope that comes across clearer.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Perception is what one perceives it to be. Is this finished though? You left it off with an unfinished sentence or perhaps the wrong word to end it. I like the thought in this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


a unique composition~ captivating in its curious form~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Boantlers
Boantlers

AK, Earth, New Zealand



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