"The Little Red Haired Girl"

“The Little Red Haired Girl”

By Cody Williams

 

I heard her from the other side of the door

Her laughter and joy

It was the sound of the little red haired girl

 

I arose from my bed

And bumped my head

I slipped on my house shoes and walked to the door

 

I placed my hand on the doorknob

And opened it

I stuck out my head

And there she stood

 

She smiled at me proudly

And bent down

She picked up her big red ball

And skipped down the hall

 

She stopped

She turned

She smiled

And then she disappeared into the darkness

Copyright 2013 by Cody Williams

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Author's Note

Let me stress again, I am NOT a poet! This is just a little something I found laying around. Please comment if you don't mind. Thanks for reading!

-CW

Reviews

[Angel]

It seems fairly obvious to me that the little red haired girl was a ghost.

Either that, or you have wandered too close to the Peanuts Dimension...
If that's the case, Charlie Brown and Linus will be along shortly...don't let them frighten you...especially Linus, with his eerie little piano...

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Angel!

-CW

[rosa]

Strange but thought provoking .

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Rosa!

-CW

[John Anderson]

very unique one from you and definitely thought-provoking

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading John!

-CW

[Anita Singh]

Who was that girl? Was she real or just a figment of your imagination? So enigmatic!!

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading AnnaBella! I also have a story called "The Little Red Haired Girl" that goes into more detail about who the little girl is and what really happened to her...but she is not a figment of the imagination...she is all too real.

Thanks again!

-CW

[Anita Singh]

Oh great! Will read it right away!

[Brittany Zedalis]

ooo, I like this a lot. Especially the ending. Leaves me wondering.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading!

-CW

[Craig2591]

I'm not good at poetry, neither writing nor reviewing it. But I like this. I like the surprise ending and the mystery that goes with it. Good job.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Craig!

-CW

[Anna Blackburn]

Lovely ending and perfect imagery. I enjoy this poem and it was perfect in length. Flawless.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Anna!

-CW

[Luke Rawlings]

I love this piece.. a brilliant ending and not expected. A good piece :D

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Luke!

-CW

[redflutterby]

Simple but sets a vivid scene. Makes one wonder if she is good or malevolent. Nice poem.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading!

-CW

[magenta24uk]

Still think you have strengths in poetry that you can not see. Well done. Spooky and gentle but makes you think.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading!

-CW