"Buffy"

“BUFFY”

 

She sneaks around

Stalking her prey,

Digging her claws in the ground

Before it gets away.

 

She snatched from it the ground

Without making a sound

As she begins to feast

She peers with no defeat

Copyright 2013 by Cody Williams

Courtesy of TRUE TERROR PUBLICATIONS

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Author's Note

Once again let me stress, I am NOT a poet. This is one that I found on the desk top of my old computer. I wrote it four or five years ago for my cat Buffy. So I guess this too would be a "trunk poem." I hope you enjoy it and because you get a kick out of how bad it is.

-CW

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

not too happy about SNATCHED FROM IT THE GROUND...Maybe change the IT and FROM around, Great name for a cat though and a pretty good poem too, I think you KNOW that you can do better. You write prose...just stick some really good prose into stanzas...It works for ME

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading it Doc!

-CW

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really nice, Cody.
Stalking her prey,

Digging her claws in the ground

Before it gets away.

You could easily talking about a panther or a tiger.
Well done.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Interesting little poem. few mistakes but hey ho.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading!

-CW

[Angel]

LOL...well, Luv, you are much better at prose, for sure. But I did get a kick out of it!!

[Cody Williams]

I know. Thanks for reading Angel!

-CW

[Jon of York]

It had you going like it was Buffy the vampire. I like it.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Jon!

-CW

[Tennessee]

Kid, its not bad it's inexperienced. I'm no poet as well, I honestly don't even like poetry that much. I see a fox as the main focus here.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading!

-CW

[sonnie ibadah]

obviously ur not a poet bt ur trialz r promising. do u wanna learn?

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading! I am not a poet. I'm a story writer. I think I'll stick to that.

-CW

[Kaylie]

Haha! Cute, I feel like you can improve this with paying closer attention to word choice.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading!

-CW

[Dayran]

The claws help but sometimes it keeps away friends as much as foes.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Dayran!

-CW

[Marie]

It's not a bad poem. Sounds like a typical cat.

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Marie!

-CW

[Mark]

I hadn't guessed this was about a cat, I kept imagining a vampire LOL Nice work, one error:

"She snatched from it the ground"

[Cody Williams]

Thanks for reading Mark! I'll make the change!

-CW