"Buffy"

"Buffy"

A Poem by Cody Williams

“BUFFY”

 

She sneaks around

Stalking her prey,

Digging her claws in the ground

Before it gets away.

 

She snatched from it the ground

Without making a sound

As she begins to feast

She peers with no defeat


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Author's Note

Cody Williams
Once again let me stress, I am NOT a poet. This is one that I found on the desk top of my old computer. I wrote it four or five years ago for my cat Buffy. So I guess this too would be a "trunk poem." I hope you enjoy it and because you get a kick out of how bad it is.

-CW

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not too happy about SNATCHED FROM IT THE GROUND...Maybe change the IT and FROM around, Great name for a cat though and a pretty good poem too, I think you KNOW that you can do better. You write prose...just stick some really good prose into stanzas...It works for ME

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading it Doc!

-CW



Reviews

Really nice, Cody.
Stalking her prey,

Digging her claws in the ground

Before it gets away.

You could easily talking about a panther or a tiger.
Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting little poem. few mistakes but hey ho.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!

-CW
LOL...well, Luv, you are much better at prose, for sure. But I did get a kick out of it!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

I know. Thanks for reading Angel!

-CW
It had you going like it was Buffy the vampire. I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Jon!

-CW
Kid, its not bad it's inexperienced. I'm no poet as well, I honestly don't even like poetry that much. I see a fox as the main focus here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!

-CW
obviously ur not a poet bt ur trialz r promising. do u wanna learn?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! I am not a poet. I'm a story writer. I think I'll stick to that.

-C.. read more
Haha! Cute, I feel like you can improve this with paying closer attention to word choice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!

-CW
The claws help but sometimes it keeps away friends as much as foes.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Dayran!

-CW
It's not a bad poem. Sounds like a typical cat.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Marie!

-CW
I hadn't guessed this was about a cat, I kept imagining a vampire LOL Nice work, one error:

"She snatched from it the ground"



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Mark! I'll make the change!

-CW

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Cody Williams
Cody Williams

Elizabethton, TN



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I am in my second year at Carson-Newman University in Jefferson City, Tennessee were I major in instrumental music education and minor in English. My passions include playing the trombone/euphonium an.. more..

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