"Buffy"
A Poem by
Cody Williams
“BUFFY”
She sneaks around
Stalking her prey,
Digging her claws in
the ground
Before it gets away.
She snatched from it
the ground
Without making a
sound
As she begins to
feast
She peers with no
defeat
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Author's Note
Once again let me stress, I am NOT a poet. This is one that I found on the desk top of my old computer. I wrote it four or five years ago for my cat Buffy. So I guess this too would be a "trunk poem." I hope you enjoy it and because you get a kick out of how bad it is.
-CW
Featured Review
not too happy about SNATCHED FROM IT THE GROUND...Maybe change the IT and FROM around, Great name for a cat though and a pretty good poem too, I think you KNOW that you can do better. You write prose...just stick some really good prose into stanzas...It works for ME
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading it Doc!
-CW
Reviews
Really nice, Cody.
Stalking her prey,
Digging her claws in the ground
Before it gets away.
You could easily talking about a panther or a tiger.
Well done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Really nice, Cody.
Stalking her prey,
Digging her claws in the ground
Before it gets away.
You could easily talking about a panther or a tiger.
Well done.
Interesting little poem. few mistakes but hey ho.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Interesting little poem. few mistakes but hey ho.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading!
-CW
LOL...well, Luv, you are much better at prose, for sure. But I did get a kick out of it!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
LOL...well, Luv, you are much better at prose, for sure. But I did get a kick out of it!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I know. Thanks for reading Angel!
-CW
It had you going like it was Buffy the vampire. I like it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
It had you going like it was Buffy the vampire. I like it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading Jon!
-CW
Kid, its not bad it's inexperienced. I'm no poet as well, I honestly don't even like poetry that much. I see a fox as the main focus here.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Kid, its not bad it's inexperienced. I'm no poet as well, I honestly don't even like poetry that much. I see a fox as the main focus here.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading!
-CW
obviously ur not a poet bt ur trialz r promising. do u wanna learn?
Posted 10 Years Ago
obviously ur not a poet bt ur trialz r promising. do u wanna learn?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading! I am not a poet. I'm a story writer. I think I'll stick to that.
-C.. read more Thanks for reading! I am not a poet. I'm a story writer. I think I'll stick to that.
-CW
Haha! Cute, I feel like you can improve this with paying closer attention to word choice.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Haha! Cute, I feel like you can improve this with paying closer attention to word choice.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading!
-CW
The claws help but sometimes it keeps away friends as much as foes.
Posted 10 Years Ago
The claws help but sometimes it keeps away friends as much as foes.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading Dayran!
-CW
It's not a bad poem. Sounds like a typical cat.
Posted 10 Years Ago
It's not a bad poem. Sounds like a typical cat.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading Marie!
-CW
I hadn't guessed this was about a cat, I kept imagining a vampire LOL Nice work, one error:
"She snatched from it the ground"
Posted 10 Years Ago
I hadn't guessed this was about a cat, I kept imagining a vampire LOL Nice work, one error:
"She snatched from it the ground"
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reading Mark! I'll make the change!
-CW
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Cody Williams Elizabethton, TN
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I am in my second year at Carson-Newman University in Jefferson City, Tennessee were I major in instrumental music education and minor in English. My passions include playing the trombone/euphonium an..
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