"The Fog On The Windshield"

"The Fog On The Windshield"

A Story by Cody Williams
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"The Fog on the Windshield" is a short story written by Cody Williams.

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The Fog On The Windshield”

By Cody Williams

            Tammy Emmett opened her eyes and looked over at the alarm clock that read 5:45. She sat up in bed with panic and grabbed the clock.

            “S**t! I got to go! I am going to be late.” She said to her husband Red, who was lying in the bed next to her. She had to be at work by 6:00. Tammy was a middle-aged woman with an average body type. She had short curly black hair and was leathery tan. She stood up from the bed and walked over the dresser on the other side of the bedroom. She pulled open the top drawer of the dresser and pulled out her typical silky white granny panties and put them on. She then took off her red nightshirt and threw it onto the floor.

            Then she opened up the bottom drawer of the dresser and reached into it pulling out a white turtleneck. She put it on and walked over to the bedside next to her husband. She kissed him on the cheek and hugged waking him up.

            “Drive safely and have a good day honey!” Red said as he hugged her then rolled back over to drift off to sleep. Red has about six feet and five inches tall and was quite muscular. He had a shaved and bigger than average sized ears. She stood up from the bed and walked over to the bedroom door and walked out it. She walked down the dark hallway to the staircase leading to the kitchen.

She walked down the stairs, into the kitchen, and over the cabinet drawers next to the refrigerator. She opened it and gabbed a Quaker Oat Meal To Go and walked over to the door leading to the garage. She walked in the garage and over to her blue colored Chevrolet Blazer SUV and put the key in the keyhole and unlocked the door. She opened the door and got into the SUV.

She reached over to buckle the seat belt and she started the SUV. She opened the garage door and backed out of the garage. She backed out of the driveway and put the SUV into drive. She began to drive down the road when she noticed that a strange fog covered the entire windshield. It was as if someone else was in the car before she got in. She reached over to the dash and turned on the defroster and waited for the fog to fade off of the windshield.

“What the hell? How could the windshield be fogged up? I am the only one in the car! Aren’t I?” She asked herself. She could hear something rattling and moving in the car. It sounded like two rats fighting for food. She pulled the SUV off of the road onto the emergency lane and put it in park.

She paused for a moment before slowly turning her head to the back seat of the SUV. She looked in the seat and in the floorboard only to find nothing. Her heart began to beat faster and faster.

“If there is someone in the car, they must be in the back.” She thought to herself. She opened the door and walked to the rear of the SUV. She placed her hand on the handle of the trunk door and waited for a moment. She took in a deep breath. She felt as if her heart was going to explode out of her chest. Her hands began to sweat nervously. She opened the rear door and leaped back knowing that there was going to be someone backs there. Nothing.

She whipped sweat off of her fore head in relief. She took in another deep breath and slammed shut the rear door. She began walking back to the front of the SUV and opened the front door. She got in the front seat and closed to door. She noticed once more that fog covered the windshield. She couldn’t understand why if there was nobody else in the car.

She looked into the rear view mirror revealing a navy blue blanket laying in the back seat. There was something strange with it. She noticed that peaking out of the bottom of the blanket were two cat eyes staring back at her. She felt her heart beat hard once again as she turned and reached to the back seat and grabbed the blanket. He screams of terror could be heard throughout the darkness that is night.

 

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Author's Note

Cody Williams
This is another one that I found that I wrote a while back. This one is for those of you who said you like my horror stories better. And yes, I realize that it is short. I wrote this one around the same time as "The Text Message." Please leave me comments and reviews!

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This one is pretty rough with spelling and grammar but again, you've done well to take the mundane(waking up for work) work in creating a setting for a strange and unusual tale. Another piece that with a bit of clean up could wind up being a great short story if you wanted.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Cody, remind me never to read you just before bedtime! I swear, you're going to give this poor old lady a damn heart attack!!!!
No kidding, this was GOOD!
Two questions...husband Red had a shaved what? "He had a shaved and bigger than average sized ears." I'm guessing his head was shaved bald?
And peaking "She noticed that peaking out of the bottom of the blanket"...did you mean peeking?
Absolutely EXCELLENT horror. Stephen King, look out...Cody is coming up behind you!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

I'll defiantly do my best! I guess Halloween is my night to shine! Maybe a chilling thrill to tell a.. read more
Angel

11 Years Ago

There will be a party at my house with the grandkids...there is every year...and every year someone .. read more
Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

I don't know quite yet. Give me a few days and I'll come up with a story or two and then I'll messag.. read more
That was really good. You captured my attention and kept it.
You have talent for writing and should continue to do so. My only suggestion is. To use different words
For "then". It would make the reading more interesting.
Great job and thanks for sharing :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review!

-CW
You are a master of suspensful stories. No pun intended. I like how you use the time elements like rushing to get to work , then the mystery to unlock in a hurry ( for her ) , the fear and anxiety ones all add to the power of this write...Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review Sami!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Holy s**t dude...still trying to Breathe again badass write my man

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review!

-CW
koty bell

11 Years Ago

Yes sir awesome write:)
Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Many thanks:)

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Cody Williams

Elizabethton, TN



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I am in my second year at Carson-Newman University in Jefferson City, Tennessee were I major in instrumental music education and minor in English. My passions include playing the trombone/euphonium an.. more..

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