"A Letter From Lacy"

"A Letter From Lacy"

A Story by Cody Williams
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A mysterious package arrives on the door step of Lacy Woodside. Whatever you do DO NOT OPEN THE BOX!

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“A Letter From Lacy”

By Cody Williams

 

To whom it may concern:

My name is Lacy Woodside. By the time you read this letter I shall be no more. This letter is meant as a goodbye note to tell my story and as a companion to the box in my closet. Whatever you do DO NOT OPEN IT! I sure wish that I didn’t.

 

The box arrived on my front porch about two weeks ago. I heard the postman honk his horn. Something about the box must have frightened him off because when I answered the door he was gone and all that was there was the package.

 

As I would normally do, I picked up the package and carried it inside. I carried it to the kitchen and placed it on the wooden counter top. I looked at the white label on the dorsal side of the package where it read TO: LACY WOODSIDE. FROM: ROBERT SMITH. This sent chills up my spine.

 

Robert was a deer old friend of mine who worked in the Science Department of the University where I worked. He died nearly two years ago from an unknown illness. Curious to what was inside, I grabbed a large knife from the uninstall drawer and cut the masking tape off of the top of it to open it. I pulled back the light brown colored pieces of cardboard back from the center of the package revealing a rectangular dark brown wooden box.

 

On the top of the box in big golden letters read DO NOT OPEN THIS BOX!!! Underneath the box was a vanilla colored envelope containing a letter written by Robert.

 

The letter went on for several pages about how he came in contact with the box and by the time I received the box he would be dead. I guess he died before he could mail it. He also went on for several more pages warning me not to open the box.

 

I wish I had listened! Why didn’t I listen? I guess my curiosity got the best of me. Like the old saying says; “The curiosity killed the cat.” In this case I am the cat and it is absolutely true! I cannot stress that enough! What is in that box wasn’t meant to be seen by human eyes. It was not meant to be known!

 

Anyway, I did exactly what he told me to do and I placed the box on the top shelf of my hallway closet…at first. I know this sounds crazy, but every time I walked by the closet, I could hear it call my name.

 

Being the scientist that I am I naturally began to get curious. I began to feel a bit over confident. I began to think to myself; why shouldn’t I open it? What could be so horrific about a 12in. by 6in. wooden box? I opened the closet door and stared at the box for a moment. I reached up and grabbed it off of the shelf. I put it under my left arm and closed the closet door.

 

I carried the box into the kitchen where I placed it on the counter top where it was before. I began to inspect the box. I realized that on the face of the box was a golden lock. I felt a mixture of relief and fear. But still I felt the nagging feeling that I needed to open it.

 

I remembered the brown envelope that came with the package. I reached over, grabbed it, and poured everything out of it. Pouring out of it was all of the documents mailed to me by Robert and a small golden key. “You don’t need to do this! What will opening that box really do for you? Remember what Robert told you!” I thought to myself. I ignored it and decided to open the box. I don’t know what it was about the box that made it so damn attractive. But I needed to know what was so horrific about it. It seemed like I would go crazy if I didn’t find out. Against my better judgment I made the final decision to open the box.

I grabbed the key, slipped it into the keyhole, and turned it to the left. I heard the lock being disabled then I pulled out the key. I placed the key on the counter next to the box and took in a deep breath. I knew that I shouldn’t do it, but I felt that I needed to.

 

I placed both hands on the wooden box and lifted up the lid. To my amazement there was nothing in there. Nothing but a red felt lined box and a glass door. I noticed a small white square shape piece of paper at the bottom of the box through the glass door. I opened up the glass door and grabbed the little piece of paper.

 

The paper read:

 

“WHO EVER OPENED THIS BOX HAS GIVEN IN TO THE WEAK TEMTATION OF MAN. YOUR PUNISHMENT WILL BE A SHORTENED LIFE. FOR EVERY HOUR YOU REMAIN ON THIS EARTH, YOU WILL AGE FIVE YEARS.”

 

I am now 85 years old. I don’t know how much longer I have left to live. Six hours ago I was only forty five years old.

 

The box is now where it should have remained, on the top shelf in the hall closet. My time is quickly running out. I can feel it. But just forget about me. Soon there won’t be nothing left of me as I slowly turn to dust. Whoever you are, whatever you do, please DO NOT OPEN THAT BOX!!!

 

Sincerely,

Lacy Woodside

Lacy Woodside

July 4, 2013

 

Copyright 2013 by Cody Williams
Courtesy of TRUE TERROR PUBLICATIONS
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Leave me a comment and tell me what you think! Also please check out my other short story "Mortality"

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There's an interesting concept explored in this piece that lends itself to introspection and contemplation of society. Some of the grammar could be cleaned up and the math on the years is wrong 6x5=30 so Lacy would be 80 not 85. Other than that this is a fun little short story. I think you could draw out the temptation aspect of opening the box so that the non-exciting revealing of what's in the box has more impact with respect to the curse.

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Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
Astro

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, sorry I took so long.



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I like it. It is well written and had me captivated. I really wanted to know what was in the box. A good comment on curiosity that's for sure. Even as the reader I found myself saying "do it, do it" what could it be... Now I can safely say that I won't be opening any strange boxes in my life time.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
Excellent story. Eve was curiousl Pandora was curious. Lucy was curious, but at least her disobediance was disasterous only to her.
I have read enough books and seen enough movies that I think I can safely say that I would ot open a forbidden box or door or cupboard.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
i have to say this is the first story ive read on this site and it was good.Nyc writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Definatly not a box to open, the ending is a good twist. cool story

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH I LOVED IT! great job!

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Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much!

CW
I really liked reading this one, the storyline is brilliant, if you ever re-write it do add some more mystery revolving around the box. Specially loved the part when Lucy has turned 85 within a span of 6 hours. Good work.

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Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review!

-CW
I like where you're going, but isn't there going to be one little problem with them dying too fast? but besides that I enjoy this, very descriptive, vivid, and detailed, and you don't seem to leave anything else out, when you write more to add to this piece please send me requests so I can follow up on the story:)

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Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
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Well I really enjoyed your story...I liked that it was short, liked the larger writing and spaced out paragraphs made it easier to read. It kept my attention and I couldn't wait to see what was in the box...and I wasn't disappointed. Great story hun...loved it :) x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pretty nice twist there. Her writting the letter as a 85 year old. Nice build up and the usual curiocity where the temptation is there to open it. Nicely done.

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Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks Shane! I will have your review up hopefully tonight if not in the morning.
I enjoyed this story Cody. I was wondering where it would go and was not disappointed. We are all curious and in this case it was an undoing.
Thank you for sharing. A great read.
Leo

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Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks Leonard!
Leonard Birch

11 Years Ago

My pleasure dear friend.

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I am in my second year at Carson-Newman University in Jefferson City, Tennessee were I major in instrumental music education and minor in English. My passions include playing the trombone/euphonium an.. more..

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