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"A Letter From Lacy"

"A Letter From Lacy"

A Story by Cody Williams
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A mysterious package arrives on the door step of Lacy Woodside. Whatever you do DO NOT OPEN THE BOX!

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“A Letter From Lacy”

By Cody Williams

 

To whom it may concern:

My name is Lacy Woodside. By the time you read this letter I shall be no more. This letter is meant as a goodbye note to tell my story and as a companion to the box in my closet. Whatever you do DO NOT OPEN IT! I sure wish that I didn’t.

 

The box arrived on my front porch about two weeks ago. I heard the postman honk his horn. Something about the box must have frightened him off because when I answered the door he was gone and all that was there was the package.

 

As I would normally do, I picked up the package and carried it inside. I carried it to the kitchen and placed it on the wooden counter top. I looked at the white label on the dorsal side of the package where it read TO: LACY WOODSIDE. FROM: ROBERT SMITH. This sent chills up my spine.

 

Robert was a deer old friend of mine who worked in the Science Department of the University where I worked. He died nearly two years ago from an unknown illness. Curious to what was inside, I grabbed a large knife from the uninstall drawer and cut the masking tape off of the top of it to open it. I pulled back the light brown colored pieces of cardboard back from the center of the package revealing a rectangular dark brown wooden box.

 

On the top of the box in big golden letters read DO NOT OPEN THIS BOX!!! Underneath the box was a vanilla colored envelope containing a letter written by Robert.

 

The letter went on for several pages about how he came in contact with the box and by the time I received the box he would be dead. I guess he died before he could mail it. He also went on for several more pages warning me not to open the box.

 

I wish I had listened! Why didn’t I listen? I guess my curiosity got the best of me. Like the old saying says; “The curiosity killed the cat.” In this case I am the cat and it is absolutely true! I cannot stress that enough! What is in that box wasn’t meant to be seen by human eyes. It was not meant to be known!

 

Anyway, I did exactly what he told me to do and I placed the box on the top shelf of my hallway closet…at first. I know this sounds crazy, but every time I walked by the closet, I could hear it call my name.

 

Being the scientist that I am I naturally began to get curious. I began to feel a bit over confident. I began to think to myself; why shouldn’t I open it? What could be so horrific about a 12in. by 6in. wooden box? I opened the closet door and stared at the box for a moment. I reached up and grabbed it off of the shelf. I put it under my left arm and closed the closet door.

 

I carried the box into the kitchen where I placed it on the counter top where it was before. I began to inspect the box. I realized that on the face of the box was a golden lock. I felt a mixture of relief and fear. But still I felt the nagging feeling that I needed to open it.

 

I remembered the brown envelope that came with the package. I reached over, grabbed it, and poured everything out of it. Pouring out of it was all of the documents mailed to me by Robert and a small golden key. “You don’t need to do this! What will opening that box really do for you? Remember what Robert told you!” I thought to myself. I ignored it and decided to open the box. I don’t know what it was about the box that made it so damn attractive. But I needed to know what was so horrific about it. It seemed like I would go crazy if I didn’t find out. Against my better judgment I made the final decision to open the box.

I grabbed the key, slipped it into the keyhole, and turned it to the left. I heard the lock being disabled then I pulled out the key. I placed the key on the counter next to the box and took in a deep breath. I knew that I shouldn’t do it, but I felt that I needed to.

 

I placed both hands on the wooden box and lifted up the lid. To my amazement there was nothing in there. Nothing but a red felt lined box and a glass door. I noticed a small white square shape piece of paper at the bottom of the box through the glass door. I opened up the glass door and grabbed the little piece of paper.

 

The paper read:

 

“WHO EVER OPENED THIS BOX HAS GIVEN IN TO THE WEAK TEMTATION OF MAN. YOUR PUNISHMENT WILL BE A SHORTENED LIFE. FOR EVERY HOUR YOU REMAIN ON THIS EARTH, YOU WILL AGE FIVE YEARS.”

 

I am now 85 years old. I don’t know how much longer I have left to live. Six hours ago I was only forty five years old.

 

The box is now where it should have remained, on the top shelf in the hall closet. My time is quickly running out. I can feel it. But just forget about me. Soon there won’t be nothing left of me as I slowly turn to dust. Whoever you are, whatever you do, please DO NOT OPEN THAT BOX!!!

 

Sincerely,

Lacy Woodside

Lacy Woodside

July 4, 2013

 

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There's an interesting concept explored in this piece that lends itself to introspection and contemplation of society. Some of the grammar could be cleaned up and the math on the years is wrong 6x5=30 so Lacy would be 80 not 85. Other than that this is a fun little short story. I think you could draw out the temptation aspect of opening the box so that the non-exciting revealing of what's in the box has more impact with respect to the curse.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
Astro

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, sorry I took so long.



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You held back didnt you. I know where you wanted to drive, just not sure if you want that gas or brake.

Posted 11 Years Ago


There's an interesting concept explored in this piece that lends itself to introspection and contemplation of society. Some of the grammar could be cleaned up and the math on the years is wrong 6x5=30 so Lacy would be 80 not 85. Other than that this is a fun little short story. I think you could draw out the temptation aspect of opening the box so that the non-exciting revealing of what's in the box has more impact with respect to the curse.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
Astro

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, sorry I took so long.
I like this CW. It reminded me of the old horror flick hellraiser and S.Kings 'Thinner'. I like the idea of the letter telling the story - I would have loved to have had someone open the box (through some ruse) to read of Lacy's demise - only to discover that they too were doomed - but we would only learn that at the end of the story.
I really enjoyed this though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Well, thanks again! I have a few poems around here that I might post in the near future. By the way .. read more
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ANTO

11 Years Ago

Ya gotta love Thinner !! Love to read your poems CW anytime...
I really like the concept this story entails, its very unique and I personally love reading stories with elements of horror and mystery! However, I do agree with Angel, there are some unanswered questions to the story; I was wondering why the box was sent to her, and why had it been two years after the death of Robert?
I also want to quickly say that if she started out as 45 and at the end of the note it had been 6 hours, she should be 75 instead of 85
Honestly is a REALLY interesting concept and I haven't seen anything like it before, temptation is a huge part of human nature and it comes up again and again throughout our lives
Great write! Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! As for your question, the story was written in the form of a letter from Lacy.. read more
Ally Monique

11 Years Ago

Ah okay gotcha! And most definitely! It would be cool if you could write the story from Roberts poin.. read more
I would have to agree with Angel, that this needs developing. The concept is strong, but you could go a long way in developing who Lacy is and who Robert is. Doing this and keeping the letter format at the same time shouldn't be that difficult. This has a LOT of potential.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
What a unique twist at the end. I really like this story.

When Lacy first receives the box all that is told is how chills went up and down her spine because of the sender. It would be nice to see more fear in her. Maybe she backs away from it or she reads it drops it on the way to the kitchen table. If you're not expecting a package, human instinct is to read it right away, right? because its unexpected and interrupts our day. That part just seemed very "robotic".

If I receive a belated package from a dead loved one, I think I'd do some of these things along with chills down my spine and entire body for that matter. ^_^

Also, the dimensions of the box bare any significance?

All in all, great story just need more descriptions and more showing.

Keep Writing!

Amaya Sullivan

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
It's a nice concept, but it needs developing. For instance, the friend who sent the box was a scientist, and so is your protaganist...good choice. Perhaps the friend found the box at an archeological dig? Or maybe an archeologist pal sent it to him? Where did the box come from, anyway? An ancient Egyptian artifact, perhaps? But if so, how is it that the paper is printed in English, instead of heiroglyphics? Some ancient magic, maybe?
Then again, why didn't the protaganist take the box into the lab? A scientist, I would think, would have done so. Most of them are...I hesitate to say it...terminally curious.
Nice ending. Gave me a shiver...just as you intended it should. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
You are the great story teller from the beginning till the end...Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review!

-CW
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
There were a few spelling errors here and there but overall, I liked the concept and philosophy woven into this story. You created a sense of urgency and thrill in your writing and it flowed at a good pace. The idea of 'man's temptation' and its ability to shorten the lifespan of one is an interesting idea. I could relate it to Adam and Eve when man gave in to temptation and as a result, he was thrown out of the Garden of Eden to age and die. In a more modern setting, we are tempted constantly by food, by drink, by sex, by escapism and the belief that we make the choice of what we do... I wonder if our own lives are shortened by giving in.

Probably so. Good write, Cody. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW
Angel

11 Years Ago

Good points, Lola!
Lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil...
That famou.. read more
Clara

11 Years Ago

Thanks Angel, I'm glad you could also relate.
You rock!
This is amAZINg!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cody Williams

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!

-CW

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I am in my second year at Carson-Newman University in Jefferson City, Tennessee were I major in instrumental music education and minor in English. My passions include playing the trombone/euphonium an.. more..

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