Destiny is lady luck gambling with our lives Good and bad share the coin but different sides Light and dark - heads or tails if you will - Darkest void, brightest sun Shape and form cannot exist with only one Painting life on canvas white with ink and quill Where it lands; the hands of fate Sometimes even the stakes are not yours to make But win or lose; how you pay your debt (or collect) Is yours to choose.
I love this poem, it's full of meaning and great lines,
I especially like the ending "But win or lose; how you pay your debt (or collect)
Is yours to choose."
It shows how we can both shape our destiny but are powerless if the hands of fate turn against us. :D
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks a lot BlaqkShadow I'm glad you liked it. That's my favorite line of the poem as well haha.
I love this poem, it's full of meaning and great lines,
I especially like the ending "But win or lose; how you pay your debt (or collect)
Is yours to choose."
It shows how we can both shape our destiny but are powerless if the hands of fate turn against us. :D
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks a lot BlaqkShadow I'm glad you liked it. That's my favorite line of the poem as well haha.
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