"Believe with the warmth of your heart and not the blindness of your eyes or the blurred words in your ears." Me
"I don't want to have lived in vain like most people. I want to be useful or bring enjoyment to all people, even those I've never met. I want to go on living even after my death!" Anne Frank
"Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth." Henry David Thoreau
“It is strange to be known so universally and yet to be so lonely.” Albert Einstein
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Very very clever, some advice my dear. Sometimes it's about quality, not quantity, it was beautiful but bewildering, you had my head in a spin. Focus on the message, there is a lot of redundancy here. Please don't take this in a negative light, I was on another writer's website where I had to take some hard core constructive criticism from published and estabolished authors, but I did not take it personally, it instead made me a better writer.
Love the wording! My favorite stanza is "Innocent Until, Proven Guilty? Or Guilty When Still Innocent? Human Nature, Answer Me" Very clever poem with a topic everyone can think about and relate to.
What Muse said! :D It was just too long for me because I didn't know who it was about. My eyes kept straying to see if the person was mentioned. Other than that, you wrote with passion and I liked how you occasionally put some lines in bold italics--it was a cool effect to emphasize those lines. So I had to go read your profile and see if I could figure out who this was about....and my best guess is Michael Jackson?
Very very clever, some advice my dear. Sometimes it's about quality, not quantity, it was beautiful but bewildering, you had my head in a spin. Focus on the message, there is a lot of redundancy here. Please don't take this in a negative light, I was on another writer's website where I had to take some hard core constructive criticism from published and estabolished authors, but I did not take it personally, it instead made me a better writer.
"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music." Angela Monet
"Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth." Henry David Thoreau
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