typing scars

typing scars

A Poem by Coccinellidae

if you have a

propensity

to want to go back and

delete

the words you write

you should probably

avoid

typing on souls

and hearts


I love you

© 2017 Coccinellidae


Author's Note

Coccinellidae
I welcome any reviews or feedback! :)

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a unique train of thought and word choice...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coccinellidae

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate that. Its about a person I was with who was a writer...to give some context... read more
A cleverness of words.. wonderful!

Don't alter your poem, tis perfect as it is. It's a lesson to be learned and remembered!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coccinellidae

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! This is one of my favorites.
nicely penned.... and that's the truth too... enjoyed it:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coccinellidae

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
I LOOOOOVE THIS!!!! ;)

Definitely speaks to the sh*t people post on social media these days, etc.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coccinellidae

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, and you're right. I hadn't even thought of it in that context but its true.
Nice twist...well done! Delivers a solid punch.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! right straight for the heart ...
no BS no punches pulled
as honest as it gets
need i say strong?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 20, 2017
Last Updated on June 20, 2017
Tags: heartbreak, loss, breakup, relationships, grief


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