typing scars
A Poem by
Coccinellidae
if you have a
propensity
to want to go back and
delete
the words you write
you should probably
avoid
typing on souls
and hearts
I love you
© 2017 Coccinellidae
Author's Note
I welcome any reviews or feedback! :)
Reviews
a unique train of thought and word choice...
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you. I appreciate that. Its about a person I was with who was a writer...to give some context... read more Thank you. I appreciate that. Its about a person I was with who was a writer...to give some context.
A cleverness of words.. wonderful!
Don't alter your poem, tis perfect as it is. It's a lesson to be learned and remembered!
Posted 7 Years Ago
A cleverness of words.. wonderful!
Don't alter your poem, tis perfect as it is. It's a lesson to be learned and remembered!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much! This is one of my favorites.
nicely penned.... and that's the truth too... enjoyed it:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
nicely penned.... and that's the truth too... enjoyed it:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you! :)
I LOOOOOVE THIS!!!! ;)
Definitely speaks to the sh*t people post on social media these days, etc.
Posted 7 Years Ago
I LOOOOOVE THIS!!!! ;)
Definitely speaks to the sh*t people post on social media these days, etc.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, and you're right. I hadn't even thought of it in that context but its true.
Nice twist...well done! Delivers a solid punch.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Nice twist...well done! Delivers a solid punch.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow! right straight for the heart ...
no BS no punches pulled
as honest as it gets
need i say strong?
Posted 7 Years Ago
wow! right straight for the heart ...
no BS no punches pulled
as honest as it gets
need i say strong?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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