Breaking Inside

I had an extremely bad day and took my feelings out on a piece of paper :P...

Breaking inside
Falling apart
Banging on walls
With no way out
Scream and cry
Broken heart
Monster growing
Turning me inside out
Lost control
Collapse on the floor
Given up
From here on out
Hope is lost
No smiles, no laughter
Darkness prevailing
The light has gone out
Dead inside
Lonely and lost
My tears fall
The love is out

Author's Note

NICELY constructive please

Reviews

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Monster growing
Turning me inside out
Lost control
sooo relate ..

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Soooo Bloody love this ... it's just how i've been feeling , it's excactly how im feeling ... Geart honest truthful deep poem :) :) :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The short sentences works so well here, shows the anger,sadness and fustration.

Yas