Heartbeat Of A Song

I love music <3

Feel the pulse?
The notes come to life
they flow through the air
Music saving some from an endless strife
going on without any a care
Pulsing strong
Slow or fast goes
the masterpiece of a melody
The music just knows
to leave you singing breathlessly
Can you hear the pulse?
Music has the ability to restore
and talks for you when you cannot speak
The pulse goes on forever
The soul of the music
goes on, endlessly long
Never stops and never sticks
This is the heartbeat of the song

Author's Note

Constructive :)

Reviews

[Scisenheart]

kira(the fetured review) is right, it is a bit cliche, but its also really beautiful. i love the idea of the music having a pule, it reminds me of being on stage and the rush of passionat excitement you feel when singing(or in your case, i asume, playing the flute, which is cool, i want to learn flute) and "talks for you when you cannot speak" is so true, because you can express so much more emotion in a song than with tuneless words. very uplifting and thank you for reminding me how fantastic, stange and wonderful music(and being on a stage) is. cause it's been months since i was last on one.
Scisenheartxx :D

[Blake Owen]

Bailey I love this poem!! It really shows your passion for music, the lines flow so nicely and it makes you think. :) Great work!

[Kira]

full of trite lines:
"they flow through the air"
"strife", which is only ever used to rhyme with life, it seems
"going on without any a care"
"smile bright as the sun"
the words "forever" and "soul"

i got too stuck on the clicheness of its individual lines to see the more individual poem when put together. you might want to work on those.

[Darius]

this is very good, it reminds me of how much i love classical music and showtunes :,D

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thank you so much for the lovely reviews you guys

[emona]

i loved it

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Phenomenal. This speaks to me for my soul strives on music. There is NOTHING to criticize about this :D

[Daydreamer54]

I like it! it's very poetic and it describes the way i feel about music as wll. i think it's ok. Sorry,but i;m not verygood with critiquing poems. :)

[Evan Kleve]

Absolutely lovely poem. :)

[raindroplove]

good job i could hear it