Heartbeat Of A Song

I love music <3

Feel the pulse?
The notes come to life
they flow through the air
Music saving some from an endless strife
going on without any a care
Pulsing strong
Slow or fast goes
the masterpiece of a melody
The music just knows
to leave you singing breathlessly
Can you hear the pulse?
Music has the ability to restore
and talks for you when you cannot speak
The pulse goes on forever
The soul of the music
goes on, endlessly long
Never stops and never sticks
This is the heartbeat of the song

Author's Note

Constructive :)

Reviews

[Scisenheart]

kira(the fetured review) is right, it is a bit cliche, but its also really beautiful. i love the idea of the music having a pule, it reminds me of being on stage and the rush of passionat excitement you feel when singing(or in your case, i asume, playing the flute, which is cool, i want to learn flute) and "talks for you when you cannot speak" is so true, because you can express so much more emotion in a song than with tuneless words. very uplifting and thank you for reminding me how fantastic, stange and wonderful music(and being on a stage) is. cause it's been months since i was last on one.
Scisenheartxx :D

This speaks to people. IT flowed very nicely and you showed a lot of enthusiasm in the topic. Great job with this piece I enjoyed reading it.

[Just Me]

The poem you have written,
was constructed so well.
The poem you have written,
has put me under a spell.
The poem you have written,
is of high quality.
The poem you have written,
Shows your great ability.

This is a weird and difficult way to say I liked it. :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

really nice and so true, the feeling when there is music we hear, "Smile bright as the sun, or tears flowing like a creek" these lines are really different and nice, i liked how you added this into the poem. :D liked this a lot

[lovepoet]

A sweet flow and rhythm

I enjoyed your song-pulse

Ignore the negative comments of others

Your work has life

Delightful!

[The old me]

very creative and well worded.

[MIngram]

I liked the message when it was all put together. I also feel this way about music. It holds no judgement and only helps us discover. I applaud you for evoking a beautiful feeling.

[Suzy Q]

I love it, especially because it is SO true. I mean, I play trumpet, and it really is just more than notes and it's all about the experiences we've had in life. Band gives you hope, well at least to me, you meet people that change your life and you get to LIVE music with them. So good.

[melOH!knee]

this is hard to review. it's like when your best friend gives you a present she made at home. not as nice as the necklace you wanted oh so badly. but also, in some warped way, even better. this was a heartfelt poem that was..... really different from the others. pretty good.

[SamBug]

I truly liked this poem. Very creative. Well done.