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Mind ramblings.......

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Cockroaches and ants

Quench their thirst

On the sweat beads from the night terrors

That dominates me

Cowardly men handle weapons

That can take a life

While beautiful women

Worship ugliness

Robins and Bluebirds call a truce

As young children sing

The Gregorian chant

In auto tune

Spirits whisper in my ears

About past glories

And future failure

I put my earphone on

And ignore

Them

Author's Note

No direction. What ever come to mind. Hopefully it will form something thought provoking.

Reviews

[Dayran]

A new experience brings strange encounters. Like an orchid you have not seen before, it is possible to say ' I don't like it' on account of non familiarity. But take a second look, growth in life comes with new experiences. A poem about the mind's rambling discoveries!

[rwar ish me]

very nice
and well written
~Amai

[Ruth]

I can see this longer as well as so concise love, beautiful work!
Makes me think of so many things.stunning flow and I would say a direction finds itself! lol xoxo

[EMF]

It may ramble, but it is an exceptionally good poem, with imagry that will stay around my head a long time Great write

[Margarette]

These mind ramblings you have turned out to be a great piece of poem. I would really appreciate it if you have made it longer since it is beautiful. The philosophy behind it is enunciating and I wanted to read more into it. Fabulous piece!

[Fairytale]

This sounds like ignoring all the ugliness in the world, or whatever may be, and tuning it all out.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Thought provoking to me.....
Good read. Great write

[FireWoman]

This spoke to me. Truth, do we really want to have all of the answers.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Your "mind rambling" is very intriguing... and it did have a thought provoking direction... Nicely penned!

[J. J. Nightingale]

BEAUTIFUL WOMEN WORSHIP UGLINESS .. HUMM ... MANY UNRELATED THOUGHTS HERE .. EACH WITH THEIR OWN MERRITT ...

COOL .. JAZZY

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i liked it...it was very thought provoking...great write