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Mind ramblings.......

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Cockroaches and ants

Quench their thirst

On the sweat beads from the night terrors

That dominates me

Cowardly men handle weapons

That can take a life

While beautiful women

Worship ugliness

Robins and Bluebirds call a truce

As young children sing

The Gregorian chant

In auto tune

Spirits whisper in my ears

About past glories

And future failure

I put my earphone on

And ignore

Them

Author's Note

No direction. What ever come to mind. Hopefully it will form something thought provoking.

Reviews

[Dayran]

A new experience brings strange encounters. Like an orchid you have not seen before, it is possible to say ' I don't like it' on account of non familiarity. But take a second look, growth in life comes with new experiences. A poem about the mind's rambling discoveries!

[Dove]

ramblings huh? Well I like it. Its very interesting. As soon as I read the first workd I was hooked. Fantastic poem!

[EMMIE]

Yes, but poetry doesn't have to make sense. It's about self expression. This is some good rambling lol. I see dark pictures in this.

[paradise]

intersting good job

[Dushyant Thadani]

The rambling is not completely senseless... Good job

[Patrick Gerlits]

Didn't have substance. As you stated beforehand.

[Sapph]

An interesting little ramble, with image provoking words.

[Raven Starhawk]

Certainly this has a strong direction that pulls me along for a amazing read. It has something lovely within.

[?]

Spirits whisper in my ears
About past glories
And future failure
and/or past failures and future glories

Well ya know you ramble so well. lol
Very nice

[∂αʌ<..]

nicely written little rant! :)

[Branch Isole]

Potentially very interesting, this piece.