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Mind ramblings.......

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Cockroaches and ants

Quench their thirst

On the sweat beads from the night terrors

That dominates me

Cowardly men handle weapons

That can take a life

While beautiful women

Worship ugliness

Robins and Bluebirds call a truce

As young children sing

The Gregorian chant

In auto tune

Spirits whisper in my ears

About past glories

And future failure

I put my earphone on

And ignore

Them

Author's Note

No direction. What ever come to mind. Hopefully it will form something thought provoking.

Reviews

[Dayran]

A new experience brings strange encounters. Like an orchid you have not seen before, it is possible to say ' I don't like it' on account of non familiarity. But take a second look, growth in life comes with new experiences. A poem about the mind's rambling discoveries!

[LinBin]

I love the way you weave a poem, bringing it to life with great skill and talent, this is great x

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

love this.. has a metally sound to it... would do good with some heavy as riffs and double bass... love the way you wrote this, it really spoke to me =]

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Your thoughts are intriguing because of the way you developed this poem out of thin air. It happens to us all. Great poem you have written.

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Great beginning Judas... Roaches & biting ants do terrorize us.
There's some straightforward thoughts throughout your poem,
especially about the cowards who hold life in their hands .. Scary stuff.
Kudos!
GBU

[Aidz]

Mindthoughts spun in the black hole of synaptic prisms belched upon the ether... spun well or belched well you choose :)

[Rene Velez]

real thoughts...

[Sagar Waingankar]

Random thoughts! But ignoring them is not fair enough I think! Think again with no past grievances :P

[Michael of Gilead]

I get away from my mind rambling in much the same way ;)

[Lily Mae]

"Spirits whisper in my ears
About past glories
And future failure
I put my earphone on
And ignore
Them"

I just love this.. excellent write for a poem with no direction ;) xx