HOH

Trying to sleep as a child can be a full time job.

HOH

 

The hounds of hell

Have caught my scent

They have been chasing me

My whole life

In my mind

In my dreams
they breathe on me as I sleep

They growl as I pray

I would rather piss the bed

Than risk an encounter

The hounds of hell have caught my scent

Their mouths are on my neck

I am terrorized

I am nine years and wanted to die......

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

dark and deep liked it a lot

[Raven Starhawk]

Riveting poem you have penned. It earns high praise and although the angst is apparent it adds to the impact this poem represents.

[ShaneBerry]

very nice, i just saw "Don't be afraid of the dark" and this was chilling as the movie was. it has such a charismatic tone, yet its slightly terrifying, nice work.
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[rwar ish me]

this is dark and deep. I really like this piece
~Amai

[WindSong]

It sounds like too many scary movies late at night! "Hounds of Hell". Great poem!
WindSong

[PinkLemonade]

Great poem. I remember the night terrors... still get them! Of course, I'm 3 years older than you were in this poem, but still(:

[Kimmee Jean]

really great poem but went where i didn't expect. I love it. please return the favor.

[Larry Dyson]

yes ...I remember the panthers that hounded Me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Get a dreamer keeper and do some meditation. When I'm stress out. I'm fighting people in my sleep. Sometime I dream I'm at work. I rather be chased by the HOH. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aidz]

Kewl scribe.. ome too many watches of Monsters lol as a nine yr old of course