PawnShop

The extent a man will go.....

PawnShop

 

A man told me he had the keys

To Heaven.

I asked him where he got them.

He said- a pawnshop on Van Nuys Blvd

From An Armenian man with a lot of K’s and J’s

In his name.

I asked him if he had anymore?

He said-no

He had purchased the last set.

So, I beat the man and took his keys

Some people will do anything to enter paradise

Even hurt his brother

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

This was just Dark Humor at its best...HEllo...

[Aidz]

Like the way this one span out, well played

[Judy Ponceby]

Wow......sad commentary on the state of our collective consciousness isn't it. Well done!

[Raven Starhawk]

Remarkably well done. I wasn't sure what to expect by the title. I thought maybe this would be about actually pawn related material. This was a pleasant surprise on my part.

[Calypso]

Wow. Not bad at all.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A powerful message here. Excellent write.

[Rene Velez]

yes he will, anyone will try the easy way out first, before the righteous way...

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

A very clever, interesting poem, which speaks of the cruelty of the world which at many times values greed more than humanity

[GlamGirl]

Very interesting. You really have to think hard