PawnShop

The extent a man will go.....

PawnShop

 

A man told me he had the keys

To Heaven.

I asked him where he got them.

He said- a pawnshop on Van Nuys Blvd

From An Armenian man with a lot of K’s and J’s

In his name.

I asked him if he had anymore?

He said-no

He had purchased the last set.

So, I beat the man and took his keys

Some people will do anything to enter paradise

Even hurt his brother

Reviews

[trainwreck]

I love this! This is a great little piece. Thank you for sharing.

[Hotwater]

Like it, like the message, I agree with the guy below, very leonard Cohen, very good work.
*bird*

[WatashLegend]

great write, I know you love Bukowski but this reminded me a bit of Leonard Cohen in its presentation, well done.

[Daytonight]

Loved it. Quirky twist. Great work.

[roy mccarthy]

cool write,
you got that l.a style of writing.....

[PaperDoll]

Creative, and cool. Has a moral in there too. Sounds like one of those parables or tales that people pass down. Like it's been around for ages. Well done.

[Muse]

This made me smirk and flinch all at the same time! Ouch....creative write.

[Skin]

sublime in capitals SUBLIME 20 FT HIGH

[FireWoman]

Wickedly entertaining.

[Chris]

Some people see
Bukowski and
Neruda and
Others WITH a Cap -
and even as gods...
and some see
...reflections.

Chris