Valley Kids

Valley Kids

A Poem by Judas Hammer
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Remember them from my days in the San Fernando Valley....

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Valley Kids

 

 

The Kids are crazy

They hang out on corners in the valley

On Sunday

Ignoring the heat

Exposing flesh

Forgetting the day

A Sunday

The last one of June

The show off sweat tanned, teenage:

Breasts

Thighs

Arms and

Shoulders

Exhibiting homemade, garage tattoos

They cluster in groups of

Two or three

For this is their future

Theses kids are crazy

As they hang on the corner in the valley

Invisible to all that are over thirty

© 2013 Judas Hammer


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This is a great depiction of teenage life. I remembering not thinking a thing about people over thirty. Now I'm forty and have teenagers who I'm always thinking about and they constantly remind me of how I was when I was their age. When my kids first started thinking that I was a dork I remember feeling annoyed until I remembered that I use to be the same way. I try and have compassion towards my teenagers, even when they are being "little s***s" because being a teenager is one of the most difficult time in one's life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a great depiction of teenage life. I remembering not thinking a thing about people over thirty. Now I'm forty and have teenagers who I'm always thinking about and they constantly remind me of how I was when I was their age. When my kids first started thinking that I was a dork I remember feeling annoyed until I remembered that I use to be the same way. I try and have compassion towards my teenagers, even when they are being "little s***s" because being a teenager is one of the most difficult time in one's life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And those over thirty are invisible to them...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

those valley kids do sound pretty cool :p

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Judas Hammer
Judas Hammer

The City of Angeles, CA



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