30 Second

30 Second

A Poem by Judas Hammer
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Don't believe you eyes. So simple but so true.

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30 seconds

 

 

A video can fool most people

Most humans beings outline their whole

Existence on a thirty-second sound bite

More people trust their eyes than their brains

For seeing is believing

Thinking is overrated.

© 2013 Judas Hammer


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Judas Hammer
I found a few decided to put them up....

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Hi, Like you said, seeing is believing. But it is what is not seen that speeks the most truth. Living in the age we live in, seems very thing is recorded some where.
What people rally around is often missgiven. Make a sound loud enough and very one will liston. Let me know what you think. Take care Joe

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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it's sad that people can't fathom other than what they see before them. like watching commercials, who make you think you have to have their product...you have to be on line even as you are crossing the street. people like this who can't think for themselves are sheep. there's so much incompetence in the world...sorry for venting, but your poem is very evocative of emotions and i'm just a dinosaur. excellent job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sweet and simple, yet touching on a topic I haven't heard about for a while. How many time have I heard the saying "I won't believe it until I see it." Well I think its awesome that you address that question here. Should you believe it just because I see it? Great job, way to get the reader thinking about their actions and their perspective. I love the last line "Thinking is overrated" awesome job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi, Like you said, seeing is believing. But it is what is not seen that speeks the most truth. Living in the age we live in, seems very thing is recorded some where.
What people rally around is often missgiven. Make a sound loud enough and very one will liston. Let me know what you think. Take care Joe

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Judas Hammer
Judas Hammer

The City of Angeles, CA



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