Diablo in Burbank

Diablo in Burbank

A Chapter by Judas Hammer
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Leaving Burbank on a midnight run after losing a fight to the Devil.......

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Chapter 1

 

     I was driving on a dark road in the northern section of the San Fernando Valley. My gas tank was heading toward E quickly. I had to leave the beautiful city of Burbank on a mid night run. Surgen my fat, bald headed, glasses clad roommate had admittedly come under possession by the Devil. This was the third time Satan had taken him over after long drinking bout lead him to suicidal thoughts. We prayed and kicked Satan out and the drunk, chubby Mexican, usually went to his room and fell face down on his bed, bathed his own slobber.

     That night was different. He hid behind his bedroom door leading to his living room. He had just finished off two bottles of vodka. He had discovered the girl he was screwing had become with child. His only choice was abortion. I tried to talk him out of it, but talk was cheap when you’re the clubhouse for old Scratch. I sat on his sofa; tired of this cheap performance of the Exorcist. He was a walking and eating Latin liar that was never to be believed. A person did so at his or her own peril.

    The night started off average as it always had. We were at the table playing dominos when the insanity took control. He received a text message with a picture of two, used pregnancy test: both read positive. What a weak fat twat sat next to me. Tears in his eyes as he drunkenly repeated the mantra,

” I don’t want to be responsible.”

      A sickness arose in the pit of my bowls. I knew this little being had no chance. Two weeks ago he bragged about cumming inside of her: like he was a man. He strutted around the living room, gut hiding under and a white wife beater t-shirt. He grabbed a pack of cancer stick and headed out the front door to the railing over looking the court, as though he slain a whole pride of lions. He crooked eye was blinded by the over hanging security lights.

     That night flashed into my head as he sat at the table tear staining his glasses. His friend Sean the skinny, crew cut drug addict who had the counting skills of a calculus instructor and Phil the stout, Colombia who worked at the sports store in studio city, whose claim to fame was helping Britney Spears buy skiing gloves had left with their condolences; one went left the other went right, into the cold night air.

     He kept drinking his lips stuck firmly to the bottle. I tried to take it from him. This mistake I would regret, trying to disarm the fat child. He stumbled around like a toddler room to room repeating the mantra,

“ I don’t want to be responsible.”

He would drunkenly storm from his apartment outside and leaned dangerously on the top railing like a fat Weeble Wobble, stumbling down the stairs. He ran to the landing and called his family, ranting in Spanish. They asked him where he was, but he wouldn’t tell them. I was obvious until then: that was a common call. The drunken dial from hell. His father’s only advice was to sleep it off. No one came. No one stayed. He was on the broad road to hell with an Iphone and vodka on his breath breath.

      I tried to keep him in the apartment. It was an impossible task, but the suicide was an act. After he again scanned the room for demons and attempted to jump out of the kitchen window, he headed out the door again into the night. Anger had over taken my once peaceful spirit or maybe it was the disgust for this weak ball of blubber. As he walked out of the door I grabbed him by the flab under his neck. It felt like a fleshy, empty hot water bag. I told him I didn’t fear his demons and to stay in the room because my baby-sitting duties where over. I saw boldness come across his flabby jowls as his face twisted with rage. He punched several holes in the door. I started packing my things; at that point I knew there was no point. I was a wrap. Done.

     I had been there before, this was a common living situation in the city of fallen angels. He sat on the couch and stared at me as I packed my bags. He dialed the police on the cell phone, “ You want to f**k with me!”

  I heard the dispatcher come on the other line. He drunkenly slurred that I was going to attack him. He told the police dispatch my social security number he had memorized. I didn’t stop nor say a word. My inner voice told me to keep packing and to get out of there as soon as possible: the devil had won the night. I moved my suitcases to my car and placed them in the trunk, he then gave the dispatch my license plate number. This beast! I was in the middle of a set up! I had to stay cool! Cool as a Burbank street when the air came onto the mountain, and then into the valley of hopelessness. 

     I remembered I had no gas when I double checked the meter. I headed back to the apartment. Surgean called his father and relayed the same information. I was on the clock. He followed me up stairs. He dumped a pot of water on the floor. He grabbed cups and smashed them on the floor, jumped on his phone again but this time he slipped on the water and fell onto the shattered pieces of ceramic.

     I reached into his pocket and took any money he had. I ran down and jumped into my car. I was nervous as a cold sweat came over me. Burbank was a Nazi cop city! What if they caught me! I could not bail out! I had to make a run for the 5 highways on ramp a mile away. Staring into my rearview fearing at any moment the Burbank boys in blue would hit me with the lights. I found the on ramp and hit the five north.

     My gas tank was below E. I had taken seven dollar from my fat, ex roommate and had three of my own. The first gas station I found was open but the cashier would not come to the window. They must have been in the back chanting Hindu prayers of good luck and no robberies.

     I took a chance and made a left. I always make a left when I trouble. I came to a large gas station and put ten dollars in my tank, then asked direction to Van Nuys and attacked the highway on my way to the Starbucks parking lot. I had slept here before. I knew Van Nuys like the back of my hand. I could live homeless in the city for a while. I had done it before.

      I made it to the coffee shop off Burbank blvd. I had spent many a lonely Friday night banging away at scripts or editing films to the backdrop of an Armenian conversation or a young, longhaired, dirty vampire trying to convince a man that dragons and UFO's were real. I pulled to the back of the large parking lot, under a bright streetlight, took out my blanket and covered my head. It was four o’clock and eight o’clock would be here soon. I feel into sleep, still numb from my ordeal.  I woke knowing I would have to devise a plan. I had one at the corner of my brain planned incase Surgan showed his true colors, which did not surprise me. The very moment the sun greeted my eyes, I would make the call: the one to my salvation.

 

 

 



© 2013 Judas Hammer


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Judas Hammer
tell me if it makes you want to read more please......

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The story is very good. It feel like real life. The problems of life can overtake us and leave us with coffee as savior and thoughts. I saw the Devil a few times in Santa Cruz. Too much tequila can bring him to you. No weakness in the excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

The problems of life can overtake us and leave us with coffee as savior and thoughts. Classic even y.. read more



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the characters are really strong and the pace is very good, it definitely held my attention. Perhaps, it could use some scenery description, or something to describe the narrator. I would work on weeding out mechanical errors, too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The story is very good. It feel like real life. The problems of life can overtake us and leave us with coffee as savior and thoughts. I saw the Devil a few times in Santa Cruz. Too much tequila can bring him to you. No weakness in the excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

The problems of life can overtake us and leave us with coffee as savior and thoughts. Classic even y.. read more
This is really good! I'm onto the next two.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much I hope I can keep your interest. Thanks for the read and write.
After reading the third chapter, where the Doc was introduced, I back tracked to the first Chapter. This one. It seems as if the protagonist is just trying to keep from being sucked into the drama. Like he's got a plan. At the same time he's going to need a place to rest his head. The Doc? I like your measured and mater of fact/ dry humor way of telling the story, JH. There's some rough spots that need to be ironed out but I know this is still in its early stages. I'll be checking out the next chapter soon, how could I not? It sucked me in.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tree

11 Years Ago

Just off hand I thought there were a few grammer issues. Minor stuff. For example check the last par.. read more
Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

okay cool thanks. I need stuff like that. Better from a fellow writer than an Editor...thank you
Tree

11 Years Ago

True. For me the hardest thing about this writing thing is editing my own work. Knowing when to let .. read more
wow dude, that sounds like a true story.
and the cops in the valley do suck.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

LOL is is true the whole book is true. Thanks for the read and yes they do suck!
Nice


Posted 11 Years Ago


Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

thanks for the read.
Yes, it makes me want to read more, definitely Your stories are so honest about the real side of life that isn't too pretty. Raw and real are the adjectives that come to mind regarding your work. I want to read about his salvation!.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

Thank you Babara for the read I try to be honest, those are the types of stories I like....Thanks fo.. read more
Judas writes fantastic stories, reminds me of Kerouac or Henry Miller, full of
magical, fantastic moments that are both lyrical but very true too. Excellent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

Thank you sir for the words. With the Help of the lord and time maybe develop into a quarter of what.. read more
wow!!! I can't wait to read more of this! wonderful start. This is going to be an awesome book! you did a wonderful job a real page turner this book is set out to be I just bet on it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Judas Hammer

11 Years Ago

Thank you Bridget. I hopefully can continue the momentum.
Bridget Mcmaken

11 Years Ago

I hope that you do continue it. It's good and really would like to read more to this story.

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