Oxygen Tank

Oxygen Tank

A Poem by Cobblestone Traveler
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Because Creative Writing prompt ^_^

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Upright at the bedside
Metallic sheen glinting
in the winter moonlight

A battery-operated night nurse
Providing concentrated life in
a tube of refreshing sighs

Its master lay slumbering
His chest rises and falls
slowly, content and secure

A breeze in murky storms
It sings a brisk, cool tune;
The low hiss of the deliverer.

© 2018 Cobblestone Traveler


Author's Note

Cobblestone Traveler
Photo by Ganapathy Kumar on Unsplash.com

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Wow. this really makes you take notice. And actually, hear and listen to this machine that gives life. I really could picture this person and scene.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Cobblestone Traveler

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dawn! I'm glad the imagery could come across!

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Added on September 26, 2018
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