In This Enchanted Moment

In This Enchanted Moment

A Poem by Cobblestone Traveler
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Dancing with primal urges. In the end, you take what you can get as long as you can enjoy their presence.

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Savoring our silent, seated company
The comforts of close friendship
But my spirit is sparking again
Beckoning auratic entanglement

In this enchanted moment
Allow your inner awakenings
Lay me down without restraint
Delivering your delicious kisses

Fawn over all of my features
With declarations of admiration
Pouring your rich words over me
With all their honeyed splendor

Tell me your hidden desires
Ravish me in unbridled rapture
And do not leave my mind
Until we're weak and spent

...

No?
Then the rhythm of your breath will do.

© 2017 Cobblestone Traveler


Author's Note

Cobblestone Traveler
Auratic: Characterized by relating to an aura. Of or relating to the distinctive quality or essence of a person, work of art, or object.

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Beautiful and gentle flow of words and thoughts.
"Tell me your hidden desires
Ravish me in unbridled rapture
And do not leave my mind
Until we're weak and spent"
The above lines are needed. Need places where true face can be seen and we can be free and wild. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Yes! Showing our true face. Letting down the guard. Thank you for your insight and your kind review.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.



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Ha! I laughed out loud at the twist in the tail.
Nicely done. =]


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

7 Years Ago

Thanks! There are those relationships where we appreciate the love they can offer and sometimes imag.. read more
Loved the flow. You made a point across with the difference of font. And a beautiful ending...not wanting much....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I really appreciate it!
Really beautiful. I loved the opening, "Beckoning auratic entanglement" The change of structure was a perfect way to show the change in tone. I loved reading this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I love that you found a transition into the fantasy.
Beautiful and gentle flow of words and thoughts.
"Tell me your hidden desires
Ravish me in unbridled rapture
And do not leave my mind
Until we're weak and spent"
The above lines are needed. Need places where true face can be seen and we can be free and wild. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Yes! Showing our true face. Letting down the guard. Thank you for your insight and your kind review.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.
This was really well written, and I can't really find any areas that could do with some improvement so keep up the good work! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D
Well written. Liked the choice of words and the extra depth and poetry it gave this poem. Great write. tyfs

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Cyprian! Appreciate you stopping by.
Cyprian Van Dyke

8 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)
we do entangle ourselves with art or
another through their art- for sure
this piece seems to long for those
enamored feelings to be reciprocated
yet being spun by that person alone
will do...
good luck staying friends.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your input. It is very appreciated :D
Very beautiful first stanza. A moment given over to wild abandon and revelry. At least that is my take away from this poem. A moment of Love and Lust experienced for a short time.

Good job, Fellow Traveler. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Indeed, wild abandon is definitely the term. There are bits of "tell me I'm beaut.. read more

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