In This Enchanted Moment

Dancing with primal urges. In the end, you take what you can get as long as you can enjoy their presence.

Savoring our silent, seated company

The comforts of close friendship

But my spirit is sparking again

Beckoning auratic entanglement

In this enchanted moment

Allow your inner awakenings

Lay me down without restraint

Delivering your delicious kisses

Fawn over all of my features

With declarations of admiration

Pouring your rich words over me

With all their honeyed splendor

Tell me your hidden desires

Ravish me in unbridled rapture

And do not leave my mind

Until we're weak and spent

...

No?

Then the rhythm of your breath will do.

Author's Note

Auratic: Characterized by relating to an aura. Of or relating to the distinctive quality or essence of a person, work of art, or object.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and gentle flow of words and thoughts.
"Tell me your hidden desires
Ravish me in unbridled rapture
And do not leave my mind
Until we're weak and spent"
The above lines are needed. Need places where true face can be seen and we can be free and wild. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Yes! Showing our true face. Letting down the guard. Thank you for your insight and your kind review.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.

[several thousand]

Ha! I laughed out loud at the twist in the tail.
Nicely done. =]

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thanks! There are those relationships where we appreciate the love they can offer and sometimes imagine the rest. ;)

[Diamond]

Loved the flow. You made a point across with the difference of font. And a beautiful ending...not wanting much....

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

[emily.c.]

Really beautiful. I loved the opening, "Beckoning auratic entanglement" The change of structure was a perfect way to show the change in tone. I loved reading this.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you so much. I love that you found a transition into the fantasy.

[Asya Kardzhaliyska]

This was really well written, and I can't really find any areas that could do with some improvement so keep up the good work! :)

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Well written. Liked the choice of words and the extra depth and poetry it gave this poem. Great write. tyfs

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thanks so much, Cyprian! Appreciate you stopping by.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome :)

[Bacchus]

we do entangle ourselves with art or
another through their art- for sure
this piece seems to long for those
enamored feelings to be reciprocated
yet being spun by that person alone
will do...
good luck staying friends.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thanks for your input. It is very appreciated :D

[Lovecraft]

Very beautiful first stanza. A moment given over to wild abandon and revelry. At least that is my take away from this poem. A moment of Love and Lust experienced for a short time.

Good job, Fellow Traveler. :)

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you so much. Indeed, wild abandon is definitely the term. There are bits of "tell me I'm beautiful" in there too. ;P