The Transaction

So much energy pouring out--is it really necessary?

I can see you're eager. Are you still talking?

Sure, come take a ride, come have a good time

And I'll direct you towards the exit gates afterwards

No need to frown, I won't turn you away

I suppose love is a form of currency

Just place it in the slot, Miss Holland, is it?

And I'll feign concern till the meter runs out

For you see, I could take you or leave you

You barely cause a ripple in the pond

Hope you enjoyed yourself, Miss Harris

Now please step off--it's time for lunch

Reviews

[tanmay7551]

Pursuit of love and interesting facts flowing out making one know the person on the cards!

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thanks so much for your review!

[Bala Gorthi]

Very interesting write! I second your supposition that love is a form of currency.. I find an interesting word play and a candid transaction in this write..
Thanks for sharing.. Keep sharing.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you very much! I'm happy you found it interesting.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Dwelling on various styles of word play is what a reader likes the most. The language is lucid and peculiar. The theme is adorable. Lovely. Keep writing.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

That is so flattering; thank you for your kind words.

[Pete]

Very clever & creative. "love is a form of currency" - great analogy. Great title and ending too. Nice job. Enjoyed this very much.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you so much!

[B]

lol

This is funny !!!

Step off

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it ;)

[B]

Yup yup .........

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Love is a form of currency"
I never thought on it like that but interesting metaphor used here. Nice reading this out of the box composition :)

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you for stopping by. I'm glad you liked it.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome. The pleasure was mine :)