The Guardian's Sigh

A Haiku.

Holding your small hand

Failing you every minute

But I'm growing, too

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the short poem. We do grow with a children in hand. Children make us know. We are not so important. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you so much. "Children make us know"- So true. You learn and develop because you have to. It comes with the job. I appreciate your review!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right and you are welcome.

[Nisreen]

I guess holding someone's hand is a very endearing act
In many ways is a telling tale of protection
Love

One that makes the heart sigh

The complete desire to grow more
To give more

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you for your review. Yes, holding the hand can be protection as well as stability for the self.

[Shabeeh Haider]

We often feel that we are not taking proper care of our child. Whatever we do, we feel that more can be done.
short lines, deep thought.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate you stopping by.