The Sick Dimension

Where do we go when we slip out of our minds?

I'm suddenly not strong anymore

Brambles, stifling and overgrown

Gasping, grasping, the ground opens up 

I'm dragged into the vast unknown

Vines vanish and eyes open

Enveloped in midnight-blue eternity

Grid lines and formulas embedded in white

Deafening silence, harrowing uncertainty 

This strange universe denies my matter

Lost in the void, the chaos sets in

I'm floating, yet I'm also confined

Craving release but bound in my skin 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"enveloped in midnight-blue eternity" is such a great line...
sometimes we feel so much uncertainty in who we are, we do want to jump out of our skin and be someone else...free ourselves from us.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Thank you so much. I appreciate you stopping by!

[SleeplessVolcano]

It is a scary reality, when past strength - or achievements we achieved in our stride - suddenly requires considerable effort.......

Maybe our souls suns set during life too.....and with patience, they rise again...:)

Delightful poetry.....

[Cobblestone Traveler]

There is poetry in your review, and I am thankful to be graced with your perspective! Thank you very much.