Nervous System Failure

Nervous System Failure

A Poem by Cobblestone Traveler
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My perspective during an anxiety attack. *Trigger warning*

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Vision narrow and whitefrantically fidgety
Static warmth ACROSS MY CHEST, IN MY CHEST
Need to pry my heart out and silence it so I can THINK

HowdidIsurvivebefore

    My brain is on double-speed, is there any way to slow it down?!
The skull is collapsing, CLOSING IN, PRESSING DOWN
I'm a rabbit caught in a trap and I need out of here NOW

I'mgoingtodieinhere

Every nerve is jolted awake, past the meter's capacity
Tremors jump THROUGH MY ARMS, THROUGH MY LEGS
Bloodrush to sides of face, if I could only stand STILL


Breathebreathebreathe


b-r-e-a-t-h-e

BREATHE.

© 2016 Cobblestone Traveler


Author's Note

Cobblestone Traveler
First Place, Live Deeply! Contest, 5/31/16

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Well its definitely a winner
Your format and break down works so well

Breathe
Pretty neat

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

I thank you for your kind review!
Oh wow, that is really something. Your formatting adds such a vivid impact. Keep breathing and keep writing. This is great! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I appreciate the review.

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2 Reviews
Added on May 2, 2016
Last Updated on June 20, 2016
Tags: panic, anxiety, attack, anxiety attack, fear, panic attack, disorder