I Screamed I Cried

I scream I cried
I couldn't lift a thing
My soul cried out
For a God I couldn't see
I sucked in a breath
And it stung like a b***h
Death was near
Pain was it's snitch

I scream I cried
As I called his name
The pain in my heart
Had wish he'd never came
Cause he broke me
Like I was glass
He's leaving me alone
Back in his past

I screamed I cried
Sitting on the floor
Asking the world why
What did you do this for
I never met any harm
Now all I feel is regret
I know I'm close to the end
Not very much time left

I screamed I cried
Because of the fear
Taking me in it hold
I can barely endear
It was never the pain
I played the game
The fear got me in the end
The snitch was never pain

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

I really like this write Angela! I love your creativity and the darkness in this write.
"I scream I cried
I couldn't lift a thing
My soul cried out
For a God I couldn't see"

I really love those first 4 lines you start the poem out with. It sets the tone for the rest of the write and it expresses the way you feel perfectly. It also presents the question that everyone asks themselves at some point in life... is there a God. You are crying out for His help yet you question his existence... in that moment of fear you cry out to Him showing what is in your heart. I loved it... I like your style... this is my kind of write :) Feel free to send me any read requests... I like the way you think :D

[Angela Sparks]

Thank you! I'm very glad you took notice of that part! I almost didn't put it. This means a lot. Thank you so much.

[AaronFreitas]

never be afraid to put your thoughts... I have this quote on my phone that says "The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." Most people wont bring up those thoughts yet it sparks conversation. I did a write called Heaven and Hell... I think thats what it's called... anyways I ask those same questions and it was kind of surprising how many responses I got to that write. Write what you feel passionate about.. people like me love your style and mind :)