My Sweet Addiction

My sweet addiction

Like homemade wine

Like the summers first wind

Or the sunshine

My sweet addiction

Like the warm breeze

In the cold evening

The way your body moves

And your smile shines

Is better then any beer

Or wine

To be lost and drunk

In your eyes

Is a dream come true

Anytime

Yes my sweet addiction

So loving and caring

So soft and vibrant

So rough and loose

My sweet addiction

I'm better then I was yesterday

And yet still untamed

You keep me calm

Yet you make me wild

My sweet addiction

Has been you for awhile...

Author's Note

My friend had me post this one. It was stuffed in the bottom of my drawer for a reason cx
Notify me if you find anything offensive

Reviews

[Robert]

I'm glad that your friend got this out of your drawer and you posted it here. This poem is raw emotion from your heart and those are the best poem of all. Nicely done Angela.

[Angela Sparks]

Thank you:) i was afraid it would be to raw to be good I guess. Leaves me at a sort vulnerable state.

[Robert]

No its not to raw, but this is a good site to get reviews good or bad. Every person that reads poems are going to come away with slight different take on it. Just take any good or bad reviews as a learning process toil be better. Vulnerable state to post writing??

[Angela Sparks]

I get anxiety when I post super emotional things. It makes me vulnerable in real life because I get bullied a lot it's not really safe for me to be.

[Robert]

Oh I see. As far as I know people here at WC are very supportive of writers. I have never seen anyone be rude or mean. Now some might not understand or like a poem but they are never man about it. If anything maybe some constructive criticism, but that is good to grow as a writer.

[Angela Sparks]

Yes I've noticed c:

[Mayank]

Hey thank you for sharing this one. I think this very sweetly written. I was just talking to a friend and she suddenly said 'I'm high on you' I got this feeling in your words. Love definitely makes you high. Like a wine, like a beer and like a drug. Good write.

[Angela Sparks]

Thank you so much! That's definitely what I was going for :) I was just nervous about trying a new style and wasn't quite sure if it made much sense

[AaronFreitas]

Nothing offensive here :) I really liked it, liked your creativity and wording.
"To be lost and drunk
In your eyes
Is a dream come true
Anytime "

Awesome work I hope to read more of it :)

[Angela Sparks]

Thank you so much:) I always add the "notify me of offense" is more of a polite thing for me (: but again thank you. It means a lot