Fighters

Some of my recent work which I do not think is anywhere near my best so please feel free to critique in your reviews. By the way I am new to this site so please bear with me :)

Searching deep inside
Using emotions as a guide
My soul has nowhere to hide
There is a darkness that has infected
A feeling being misdirected
Time can only tell
If this is heaven or if this is hell
Too many people gone too soon
Too many people meeting some doom
Time will be the essence of good vs evil
Time will battle this world's upheaval
Too little too late some may say
But for the fighters out there,
Tomorrow is a new day.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think and what could use improvement.

Reviews

[ANTO]

I like the fantasy stylings of this as well as the motivational aspects (fighters - tomorrow is a new day, etc) and the tie in to the title of the penultimate line
I didnt like these two lines much -
"Time will be the essence of good vs evil
Time will battle this world's upheaval " - I thought using Time was misplaced or at worst lazy. Was Time meant to be the deciding factor ? If so would not "Time will be the decider of good vs evil" be more appropriate - I didnt get the rationale behind the suggestion that Time will battle FOR the world in the line "Time will battle this world's upheaval" - did you mean Time will help relieve or reverse or fix..?

The final two lines are exquisite - a knockout punch "Tomorrow is a new day" - simple but says so much in the context.

I liked this Cmickkitkat ;p

[Pragya Vishnoi]

Yes,however bad today is tomorrow will always be a new day.I liked the philosophy.