Crazy, Deep Love

Written for the man who saved and stole my heart, I hope he knows how much I appreciate and love him. =]

I only hope that you can see

How deeply I'm in love

I've never felt a purity

Like the Strength of all your hugs

Looking into your clear blue eyes,

They captivate my soul:

Without even raising a finger,

You have me as a whole

My body aches almost with pain

When I have to pull away,

Counting the seconds to your embrace

through the everlasting day

Forgive me, my love, for having fear

That it could be Too good to be True-

I love you so much, baby,

and I Can't Take My Eyes Off Of You

A past of so much darkness 

has nearly been erased,

But still, I'm only human,

And I have made mistakes

But even when I'm fighting you,

it's only because I care

So much more than you can see:

So much that I am scared

Trusting you with my heart,

I am willing to overcome

The things my past has made me,

Now that a new future has begun

Reviews

[Author Unknown]

Love is really a mysterious and splenderous thing. Love is not being strong and tough but rather when we at our most vulnerable point we embrace and admit our mistakes and shortcomings. We see that as real beauty and strength. Something to be truly admired and worthy of caring and protecting. Superbly penned. I felt the genuineness of every line.

I still could not access all ypur profile page

[A. Amos]

Beautiful verse just love the style of your writing will come back for more read.

[Cmerideth]

Thank you! :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[A. Amos]

But even when I'm fighting you,
it's only because I care
So much more than you can see:
So much that I am scared

[:o]

This is an excellent poem with artistic rhymes and a emotion filled heart that wrote it.

[Jack...]

Definitely love is shining brightly in this poem. He sounds like a very lucky man for sure.

[Blank]

This is beautiful, it sounds like you've found something amazing!

[Cmerideth]

Thanks for reading! I really have, I am lucky :)

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful and sweet poem for him. Thank you for sharing...:)

[Cmerideth]

Thank you, I'm glad you stopped by to read

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)