Don't Forget Me

Don't forget me!
A whisper
A thought
A murmur
A plight
The last words that echoed
Through that cold, lonely night

Don't forget me!
A dream?
It's reality
A scream
It's purgatory
The forever turning cog
Of this turmoil factory

Don't forget me!
That was it
Her last words
Her last sentence
Her last thought
Before she vanished

Don't forget me!
This is it
This is my mark
My existence lonely
My heart clouded dark

I'll leave you with this
My last will and testament
Forget not my face
Forget not my eyes
I've finished my race
And I've won my prize

Reviews

[Just Kim]

Wow reading this aloud has a certain power to it,
I found this write, very nicely written.

[Mason Rayburn]

A common trait of my poetry is the rhythm the words create. Certain poems just come out in a rhythmic fashion with single words or short phrases making up every line. That's pretty much my style most of the time, but I do have a few poems comprised of semi-thought-out rhymes. Each has it's own affect. Glad you liked it.

[Just Kim]

you are a very good writer.

[Mason Rayburn]

I definitely would say I have potential. Being a writer is my dream, so I'm just getting my work out there at this point.

[Just Kim]

keep at it you'll do fine

[Mason Rayburn]

Thank you, thank you. :3